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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Postby The_Gnat » April 8th, 2017, 5:11 am

And here is a man version of the ranger modification:

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Postby GunChleoc » April 19th, 2017, 3:22 pm

I think these ones' heads are too small - make the body smaller (If you scale the head up, it will get fuzzy)

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Postby The_Gnat » April 19th, 2017, 11:51 pm

Thank you for posting, the first one I didn't make but I will see if I can improve the other.
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Postby WhiteWolf » May 2nd, 2017, 8:13 pm

These are awesome :D
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Postby The_Gnat » May 19th, 2017, 7:45 am

Here are some franken drakes!

for more visit this thread.

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This needs work, but i can't decide what to do to make it look more ferocious and powerful.
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Postby Ravana » May 19th, 2017, 8:07 am

Chancellor looks good.
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Postby Vulpine » May 19th, 2017, 1:46 pm

I think the problem with the maelstrom is the wings; the wings are a real pain in the neck. In this case if you look at the tip of his horns, you'll see the wing going behind them, giving the impression that it's bent behind his head. You also have a bit of the old wing poking up behind his head ;)

On the conqueror the wings seem to be the biggest problem as well; you only see one wing (though it could be intentional. I don't know.) and that wing seems to have some issues where it meets up with the haft of the trident. I like the vestigial size as it gives the impression of having been out of use for decades :) His right forearm and his legs do look a bit thin, but that is negligible.

Now, the critique about the wings being given, if you look closely at the sprites I mutilated, I didn't even bother messing with the left wings in most cases :P :lol:

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Postby The_Gnat » May 19th, 2017, 10:02 pm

Thank you for the feedback Vulpine! :D I will attempt a remake of the Maelstrom with your advice in mind. As for the conqueror i don't really feel like redrawing :whistle: but thank you for the advice (i hadn't even realized that thing on his back was a wing :mrgreen: )

Also here is another sprite. This is the Dwarvish Sage Futuristic, a level 4 Loremaster who has been animated (to the best of my ability), animations can be found in my add-on.
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Postby The_Gnat » May 19th, 2017, 10:52 pm

Here is a remake of the maelstrom is this any better? (comments are welcome!) :D
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Postby ForestDragon » May 20th, 2017, 5:09 am

The_Gnat wrote:Here is a remake of the maelstrom is this any better? (comments are welcome!) :D
Looks good! I don't think you really need to improve it too much past this point.
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Postby The_Gnat » May 20th, 2017, 9:36 pm

Thank you ForestDragon! It is not as good as the Chancellor but i believe it is acceptable. :)
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Postby The_Gnat » May 26th, 2017, 4:52 am

I somehow had forgotten to post this portrait when i drew it a few months ago:

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Postby The_Gnat » June 9th, 2017, 3:56 am

And now a few minor edits to some drakes: (these aren't significant changes but need because portrait of a drake with green wings for a sprite with red wings doesn't really fit)

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Postby WTrawi » June 9th, 2017, 1:38 pm

I personally think that the maelstrom's red wings don't really match its green scales (it would be better with brownish scales for example), but the chancellor is really cool 8)
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