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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by ghype » April 23rd, 2018, 11:59 am

Lordlewis wrote:
April 23rd, 2018, 11:14 am
I feel like the helmet suits her, but in some way doesn't...
thats because she could pass as a dude with that helm and no blond hair.
i fixed that. gave her hair back.
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about the sword dunno, either u find something better or work with mine.
i made a sabre recently which fids here color sceme, maybe other bigger blade deserve a reskin too.
but up to you guys.
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by ghype » April 23rd, 2018, 12:08 pm

i improved the hair structure.. they are more noticeable now then before
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EDIT:
actually both are fine. u guys gotta decide.
for some reason the forum preview is shrinked which let me believe the sprite aint good.
it looks much better in photoshop then on forum
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EDIT2: ok. my window was zoomed out . that explains it.
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Lordlewis » April 23rd, 2018, 12:28 pm

Lol, I think the first one looks a little better since her hair is a little bit all over the place. I don't mind the sword that much either, or I do wonder what it would look like if it were shorter...
I was thinking about making the main sword gold and shiny!
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by ghype » April 23rd, 2018, 12:59 pm

Lordlewis wrote:
April 23rd, 2018, 12:28 pm
I was thinking about making the main sword gold and shiny!
i tried the exact same but failed. maybe u will succeed.
Lordlewis wrote:
April 23rd, 2018, 12:28 pm
I think the first one looks a little better since her hair is a little bit all over the place.
now coming back and watching at them again i agree. first one looks better.

feel free to make the sabre any lenght you want.
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat » April 23rd, 2018, 8:20 pm

Great! That looks really good, the only thing is I would suggest making both sword blades the same colour.

Also I like the new lvl 4 Konrad but since there are so many variations which is supposed to be used?

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by ghype » April 23rd, 2018, 9:20 pm

The_Gnat wrote:
April 23rd, 2018, 8:20 pm
I would suggest making both sword blades the same colour.
lewis wanted to do that. i tried but failed.
The_Gnat wrote:
April 23rd, 2018, 8:20 pm
but since there are so many variations which is supposed to be used?
here are the last 2 candidates from me
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and here is lewis most recent one
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i think any of my two are closer to a transition between the current lv 3 and lv5.
but if you'd want to have the lv 4 a shield like lewis suggested, I'd take either his sprite and recolor his robe and add a smaller sword or take any of mine and simply add a shield.

i am not sure if i would give the lv 4 the same shield as lv5 but guess at the end you still have to decide
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Lordlewis » April 23rd, 2018, 10:57 pm

I've edited the old Konrad sprite with the shield (which is not the same shield as the level 5) to have grey clothes instead of blue...
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I've also edited the sword colors on Lisar...
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Also the name for the two lords (one in rise of Wesnoth and the other in Heir to the throne) should have the same advancement names, since all of the units in the advancement lines have the same names.

Edit: this is what the advancement line looks like now...
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Lordlewis » April 24th, 2018, 5:10 am

Also, here is the advancement for the lord unit from the Rise of Wesnoth and the noble's adv
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I was thinking of adding a small shield to the level 5 lord, but none of them seemed to work very well...
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat » April 24th, 2018, 6:37 am

Nice! Thank you very much! What about a feather or plume in the lvl 5's hat?

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Lordlewis » April 24th, 2018, 9:19 am

I've added a plume onto his head, and here is the result of that...
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He's starting to look more like the supreme commander a little, it works kind of well since they are both level 5 human leaders.
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat » April 24th, 2018, 9:24 am

Lordlewis wrote:
April 24th, 2018, 9:19 am
I've added a plume onto his head, and here is the result of that... noble-lord2.png
He's starting to look more like the supreme commander a little, it works kind of well since they are both level 5 human leaders.
Yes I agree that is really good! :D And I agree it makes sense that they look like the supreme commander.

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat » April 24th, 2018, 9:25 am

Are you planning on making any more sprites or do you think it is ready to be released?

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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Lordlewis » April 24th, 2018, 9:38 am

I've had a look through all of the campaigns and I think all of the units that need a level 4 or 5 are done. I was thinking about a level 5 Wesfolk leader, but I couldn't think of anything to give to her... Unless you can think of an idea (or just skip her level 5 advancement), then I think it's done.
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by The_Gnat » April 24th, 2018, 9:44 am

Okay great! Also I just had a quick idea of making konrad taller because as units advance they usually grow and I didn't want him to look to small when sitting next to the other lvl 5 units such as the Orcish Supreme.

Here is a quick attempt to make him taller what do you think?
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Re: The Gnats Franken Dungeon

Post by Lordlewis » April 24th, 2018, 9:48 am

Yeah, I like the fact that he is a little bit taller. Since he would grown since when he starts his journey he is a little young, but I don't really see why we need that symbol on his shield. I'm pretty sure it's the scepter of fire, and Konrad isn't apart of the loyalists until the end of the campaign, so I don't really see any need for it to be there...
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