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Re: New Merman

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Elvish_King wrote:P.S. New name for the deapseefighter: treasure seeker?
Good idea *thumbsup*

The usual term for Satzsucher in English is treasure hunter though.
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Re: New Merman

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Lvl 1 with shadows is the best one.
Is the ball of the lvl 2 - new weapon flying? It looks strange.
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Re: New Merman

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I like the sword more than bash weapon. It's more pirate-like.

The inner outlines look good. I do miss the mustache of the units (and yes, in my example I screwed up them too).
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Re: New Merman

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GunChleoc wrote:The usual term for Satzsucher in English is treasure hunter though.
I know but the level two is named "Shellhunter" and it wouldn't sound good if the level 3 also is named hunter.
pe_em wrote:Is the ball of the lvl 2 - new weapon flying? It looks strange.
It is not flying, it is drawn with the same concpt like the morning star from the White Cleric.
SFault wrote:I like the sword more than bash weapon. It's more pirate-like.
The inner outlines look good. I do miss the mustache of the units (and yes, in my example I screwed up them too).
Hmm...Maybe your right with the sword...Let's make another merman, a real tank unit.
The level 2 does have a mustache but level 1 hasn't, I'm going to add it.
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Re: New Merman

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I tried to make a tank unit something like the Heavy Infantryman or the Wose but it didn't work well. Anyway, I post it because maybe you have some ideas.
The worst merman I ever made...
The worst merman I ever made...
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Re: New Merman

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I think the main problem is the different colour palette. It looks too bright in closeup.
The weapon choice is fitting for a heavy unit, but it's propably useless under water. Using his tail as a weapon might be the better option.

I replaced the colours with the ones of the merman fighter, so you could see it in comparison:
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I also made some minor changes at the torso
I also made some minor changes at the torso
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Re: New Merman

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A Merman Berserker. Give it a Lesser Berserk ability that prolongs combat for 3 turns instead of 30.
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Re: New Merman

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Very nice and interesting graphics. :)
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Re: New Merman

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I got one!

Firstly, I don't see mermen fighters as "stand your ground blocker" types suited to figthing in armor or with heavy shields - just my personal view, but I think they'd rather used their agility and speed in the water to defend (by evading) than make themselves heavy and slow.

Personal preferences and ideas aside, I have a suggestion for your sprite.
Change the fish half!
I was thinking of an armored fish like a sturgeon, if you're cunning, you can make it so you're not sure where the armor ends and the merman starts, but big bony (or bony looking) plates on the tail part make more sense to me than huge shoulder pads (not very hydrodynamic).

As I said, just my feelings on the matter, hope you can get something helpful out of this.
...apparenly we can't go with it or something.
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Re: New Merman

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@Midnight_Carnival: ag very good idea but my realization is not good.
First, I tried to make the merman looking like you can see the bones through his skin but that was very very bad and I had not plan to improve it.
So, secondly I tried to make the bones real visible, it was better than my first try but it is far away from being acceptable, not even good. Although I post it because I don't know what do to with this ....
Looks like half skeleton, half strange fish...
Looks like half skeleton, half strange fish...
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EDIT: I made an attack animtion for the diver, is it good/bad?
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Re: New Merman

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Do yourself a favour and use the (dead water) brawlers for additional impact damage, they are really unique buff L1, resilient and AMLA'd (cheap on them) they can become as sturdy as some high-level units at only L1 cost. They have a special ability that makes all your other units more efficient - being able to break through ZoC with non-skirmishers is extremely powerful, even more so against human players who unlike AI are able to protect important units under normal circumstances.

You can also enrich the faction by "allied" creatures instead of filling all roles with merfolk. All single-player merfolk appearances come with one or more storm tridents, so I would look for a way to integrate them into play.
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Re: New Merman

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Elvish_King wrote:@Midnight_Carnival: ag very good idea but my realization is not good.
First, I tried to make the merman looking like you can see the bones through his skin but that was very very bad and I had not plan to improve it.
So, secondly I tried to make the bones real visible, it was better than my first try but it is far away from being acceptable, not even good. Although I post it because I don't know what do to with this ....
A 'boxier, carton-shaped' body with more back, thicker waist, more "Sydney opera house" on thet tail, tail itself a different shape, kind of like a shovel. I could draw you a sprite of what I mean, but I should first say that your ability far surpasses my own so it will be a 'sketch'...

Oh yes, and limpet shoulder pads, mermaid girls get all weak in the fins when they see those badass 'church of the new epoch meets sea quest' limpet shoulder pads.
...apparenly we can't go with it or something.
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Re: New Merman

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Diver is cool :)
But when I look at the last frame, I think it's too bright.
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Re: New Merman

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I decided to come back to the merman because I wanted a lvl. 4 unit for each faction of my era. I decided to draw a lvl.4 hoplite because he is the weakest of the lvl.3 units (I think :P )
Here it is:
I took the shield from WaterEra
I took the shield from WaterEra
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What do you think about him?
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Re: New Merman

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Elvish_King wrote:What do you think about him?
Out of stupid curiosity I've added a contrast shadow where the shield overlaps body.
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