Prime Era and other Art's
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Prime Era and other Art's
Hi folks.
Im new to this forum so start with hello
There are my images for Prime Era.
So constructive critism is welcome .
Anyway just tell what's wrong,good.
Enough talking.
They are probably franken units.
More soon.
Im new to this forum so start with hello
There are my images for Prime Era.
So constructive critism is welcome .
Anyway just tell what's wrong,good.
Enough talking.
They are probably franken units.
More soon.
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- My spearman.
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- An 1lvl unit.
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Last edited by mylife55 on June 10th, 2015, 10:20 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: My general art's.
Hi mylife55!
Some "constructive critism"
This spearman looks like he's going to fall on his spear (look at his leg).
The noble's shield is put too far from the body. His legs are ehm... strange. He's got bare knees, but he's wearing an armour
Some "constructive critism"
This spearman looks like he's going to fall on his spear (look at his leg).
The noble's shield is put too far from the body. His legs are ehm... strange. He's got bare knees, but he's wearing an armour
Re: My general art's.
It will be change soon.
Anyway's here is an unit drawn from 0 even shading.
I don't know what is it.I just drawned it crazy .
Anyway's here is an unit drawn from 0 even shading.
I don't know what is it.I just drawned it crazy .
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- Wat is it? :D
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Re: My general art's.
You told it to negatively. The overall looking of the units is quite good, there just a few things which could be improved.
Another thing referring to the noble, his upper shield border is not a thick as it is for example on the left or the right side.
I think his left arm is to long if you make the spear nearer his body it will look better.pe_em wrote:fall on his spear (look at his leg).
Another thing referring to the noble, his upper shield border is not a thick as it is for example on the left or the right side.
Re: My general art's.
Updated spearman.
-I changed the arm and spear position
-A little bit changed his legs.
-I changed the arm and spear position
-A little bit changed his legs.
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Re: My general art's.
Looks better, but the spear is still too far from his body
That ehm... what on the earth is it?
This unit is too high.
Quite good proportions , but the shading is done badly in my opinion, and also its left hand is put too low.
That ehm... what on the earth is it?
This unit is too high.
Quite good proportions , but the shading is done badly in my opinion, and also its left hand is put too low.
Re: My general art's.
pe_em it was too be an high unit.
Another edit of spearman.
He has spear on his back .
Another edit of spearman.
He has spear on his back .
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Re: My general art's.
This version is definitly better than this before.mylife55 wrote:Updated spearman. -I changed the arm and spear position
I liked the second version better. If you use the last one you have to care about his arm position. I can hardly tell what it is, but it looks a bit strange.mylife55 wrote:He has spear on his back
Re: My general art's.
Your units look good. The second version of the spearman is best(in my opinion), but, as pe_em mentioned, the spear should be nearer to his body.
About your 2-headed unit: It is too symmetrical, would be better if it faces to south-east direction, also legs could be thicker.
About your 2-headed unit: It is too symmetrical, would be better if it faces to south-east direction, also legs could be thicker.
Re: Prime Era and other Art's
Some units from my Dark Force faction.
OLvl Base Unit Female
OLvl Base Unit Female
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- 3lvl Second Magi
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- 3lvl Magi
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- 2lvl Magi
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Re: Prime Era and other Art's
I like the guys with glowing eyes, but all these last sprites are way too dark. You can't see any shading, so they look flat. You should take a look at the dark adept up close. It's the darkest mainline unit, but the highlights are drawn in this light-green color:
You should use a palette of colors ranging from black to something like this.Campaigns: Dead Water,
The Founding of Borstep,
Secrets of the Ancients,
and WML Guide
The Founding of Borstep,
Secrets of the Ancients,
and WML Guide