Elvish units
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- Tom_Of_Wesnoth
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Re: Elvish units
That's better, I can tell what it is now.
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Re: Elvish units
Here is a new version of the level 2 elf with the staff.
I fixed his cape and clothes around his bow.
I fixed his cape and clothes around his bow.
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Re: Elvish units
That one's definitely progress in the right direction.
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Re: Elvish units
That one's definitely progress in the right direction.
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- Elvish_King
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Re: Elvish units
I changed the weapon on the elf with staff (lvl 3).
( I didn't like him, eihter )
Here are 2 versions:
Say which of theese you like more and I will improve it.
( I didn't like him, eihter )
Here are 2 versions:
Say which of theese you like more and I will improve it.
Re: Elvish units
stafflvl3-2 seems strange(that spear goes through unit, notice layer of cape), so I would use first one.
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Re: Elvish units
Of course one opinion is good but be sure I prefer to have more.
You can say what should be improved in no.1 or no.2 and you can also give new ideas how the unit could look like. ( for example: How he holds his staff/bow/...?)
You can say what should be improved in no.1 or no.2 and you can also give new ideas how the unit could look like. ( for example: How he holds his staff/bow/...?)
- Elvish_King
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Re: Elvish units
I wasn't content with the lvl.3 elf so I made a new variant of him.
EDIT: The problem I got is that he actually doesn't look like a lvl.3 unit.
Can anybody help and say how I can make him more "lvl.3-like" ?
EDIT: The problem I got is that he actually doesn't look like a lvl.3 unit.
Can anybody help and say how I can make him more "lvl.3-like" ?
- Elvish_King
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Re: Elvish units
Anybody?
For over a week nobody posted something.
Any comments, advice or suggestion for improvement ?
For over a week nobody posted something.
Any comments, advice or suggestion for improvement ?
Re: Elvish units
Make him a pixel bigger than the lvl2?Elvish_King wrote:Can anybody help and say how I can make him more "lvl.3-like" ?
Maybe it would be nice to give each level a distinct hair (decoration). You could make it a pattern for your units allowing them to be recognized easier; right now it's different for your three units what happens with their bandanas when they level up: it stays the same, becomes less or becomes more.
On a different note, it seems to me that the top lvl3 from your original post has his legs spread awfully wide apart.
I have a cunning plan.
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Re: Elvish units
Here is the next version:
I tried to include SFault's and nourc's suggestions.
I gave him another hair, a bigger bow and a quiver with TC'd arrow feathers.
I think he looks quiet good, but what do you think?
I tried to include SFault's and nourc's suggestions.
I gave him another hair, a bigger bow and a quiver with TC'd arrow feathers.
I think he looks quiet good, but what do you think?
- Paulomat4
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Re: Elvish units
I like him. He's much more lvl-3-ish than before. Good Job!
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- Elvish_King
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Re: Elvish units
Thanks !Paulomat4 wrote:I like him. He's much more lvl-3-ish than before. Good Job!
I tried to fix it:nuorc wrote:On a different note, it seems to me that the top lvl3 from your original post has his legs spread awfully wide apart.
Say which of theese you like most.
Re: Elvish units
Maybe 'my problem' was that the legs and feet form visually nearly straight lines; mainline elves have the feet at a different angle and/or there's a 'bump' at the top of the boots.
I better leave judgement to people more knowledgeable about proportions and perspectves.
I better leave judgement to people more knowledgeable about proportions and perspectves.
I have a cunning plan.