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maksiu
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My images ;)

Post by maksiu » November 29th, 2014, 10:20 am

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Re: My images ;)

Post by firefox » November 29th, 2014, 8:56 pm

your frankensteins look really good! I can't believe that this is your first try, youe were so creative. :shock:
(exept the guy with the silver armor and the yellow banner: his breast and shoulders are too large, he looks like He-Man.)

I can't rate your self-drawn sprite, because I never tried that myself so far.
I'll leave that to the experienced artists.
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Re: My images ;)

Post by maksiu » November 30th, 2014, 8:18 am

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Re: My images ;)

Post by maksiu » November 30th, 2014, 4:07 pm

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Re: My images ;)

Post by maksiu » December 2nd, 2014, 1:06 pm

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Re: My images ;)

Post by MerlinCross » December 2nd, 2014, 8:24 pm

Suggestion on the Killer sprite.

Maybe change the color of the armor? When I first started this post I thought he was shirtless but saw it was some sort of armor when I zoomed in.

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Re: My images ;)

Post by maksiu » December 3rd, 2014, 6:36 am

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Re: My images ;)

Post by firefox » December 3rd, 2014, 9:09 am

i think that the 1. is better, because the armor has the same contrast and outline as the rest of the unit.
the 2. armor is too shady compared to the rest of the sprite. it looks like it it is floating in front of the unit.
but when you give the 2. armor a stronger outline, it will become better than the 1. one.
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Re: My images ;)

Post by maksiu » December 3rd, 2014, 1:15 pm

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Re: My images ;)

Post by MerlinCross » December 4th, 2014, 12:34 am

Something looks off on the second sprite. Something about the body/torso area. Like it's way too thin on the left side(our left). I dunno, it's hard to actually put into words.

Other two look good.

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Re: My images ;)

Post by maksiu » December 4th, 2014, 7:14 am

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Re: My images ;)

Post by MerlinCross » December 4th, 2014, 8:34 am

Hands look fine. The upper chest piece looks weird but I suppose from the angle works. Other suggestion is throw something in the hood. You don't need a face but maybe a red(or color of your choice) eye shinging from within.

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Re: My images ;)

Post by maksiu » December 4th, 2014, 6:17 pm

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Re: My images ;)

Post by maksiu » December 5th, 2014, 8:00 pm

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Re: My images ;)

Post by maksiu » December 6th, 2014, 1:29 pm

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