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Re: My images ;)

Postby Ravana » April 18th, 2015, 9:43 am

First image: right hand weapon seems to end strangely. Hair is good

Warriors: in game more contrast between advance paths would be preferable

Machine looks interesting.
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Re: My images ;)

Postby Elvish_King » April 18th, 2015, 11:51 am

Good images 8) but the left side of the shields from the akladians seems to be cut off.
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Re: My images ;)

Postby Crow_T » April 18th, 2015, 6:40 pm

The latest sprites for the most part are really solid, awesome work. The last 3 are suffering from bodies that look tubular, they need more shape to the mid sections.

(The Akladians are super sweet :mrgreen: )
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Re: My images ;)

Postby pe_em » April 19th, 2015, 5:56 pm

"Jesteś polakiem, pisz po polsku.":


Hi Maksiu,
I like the machine. Did you draw it yourself?
I commented the Akladian. The contours are missing and - like Elvish_King said - the shields seem cut.
This golden warrior is cool. :) But his helmet has got different shadows :/ You can see it on the second unit,
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Re: My images ;)

Postby maksiu » June 7th, 2015, 1:59 pm

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Re: My images ;)

Postby pe_em » June 8th, 2015, 6:48 pm

Looks good :)
My suggestions:
1) the hair is too big
2) his axe is a little illegible. Maybe re-drawing it and making it brighter would solve this issue.
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Re: My images ;)

Postby maksiu » June 9th, 2015, 3:58 pm

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Re: My images ;)

Postby Crow_T » June 10th, 2015, 12:54 am

Nice work again, sadly all of your older pictures have gone away :augh: Perhaps it's best to use the built-in uploader instead of a 3rd party service.
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Re: My images ;)

Postby Midnight_Carnival » June 10th, 2015, 8:46 am

Your sprites are beautiful, you have a unique (amime themed?) style.
I love all of them (that I can see) but I think your warrior guy with the beard and sword could do with a little more shading or detail on his armor perhaps, I find it hard to see what's going on there.
Thanks, keep drawing.
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Re: My images ;)

Postby maksiu » June 12th, 2015, 11:11 am

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Re: My images ;)

Postby Mabuse » June 12th, 2015, 11:45 am

hey, where is all your beautiful work? :)

from what i have seen in the last posts, i really would like to see your other stuff :)
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Re: My images ;)

Postby maksiu » August 3rd, 2015, 4:40 pm

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Re: My images ;)

Postby maksiu » August 3rd, 2015, 4:59 pm

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Re: My images ;)

Postby Midnight_Carnival » August 4th, 2015, 11:40 am

The top guy is my favorite although I don't know exactly why.

The combination of long polearm and small shield on the others looks ok but doesn't make much sense or make sense but looks a bit funny, I can't work out which in my present state. I also think that while I like the way the units look in different team colours, you might try only posting them once in team colour perhaps?

I think you are drawing well and you have grown from doing (perhaps a little over the top) very original, very unique units to drawing very original units which could easily be part of a regular army. You've been making graphics for a while haven't you?
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Re: My images ;)

Postby maksiu » August 4th, 2015, 12:23 pm

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