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Re: Promised Land: Goblin Campaign

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I think it looks pretty solid for a portrait right now.

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Re: Promised Land: Goblin Campaign

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Some revision. Worked further on some lighting issues, and I'll call it done.
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Awesome! Coming in the next release!
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Re: Promised Land: Goblin Campaign

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Arrow tip still doesn't look nicked enough. Try going for a flatter arrowhead and make it look tied on, or simply make that one more amateurish.
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I forget what the first level is called, but that's the one I'm working on below.
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Concerning the goblin archer portrait: shouldn,t the arrow be on the other side of the bow? I haven't got extensive archery skills/knowledge, but it seems to me that the arrow goes on the thumb's side, not on the back of the hand's side... :?
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Re: Promised Land: Goblin Campaign

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@artisticdude Goblin Torcher ;) Looking good. Could you make a similar armor as the Gobo Spearman's? That would be great. (Forgot to say that in the pm :oops: )
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Re: Promised Land: Goblin Campaign

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Oh, it's supposed to have armor? Dang, and I just finished struggling with this cloth (which I might as well post anyway). Oh well, shouldn't be too hard to slap some armor on him. Do you want the spearman's helmet as well?
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Well it looks pretty good already. Maybe no armor until lvl 1? Well, it's your call. Do what you think is best.
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Re: Promised Land: Goblin Campaign

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I love his earring! It's a very unique unit. Do you plan on implementing Rhyging's fire technique?
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elvish_sovereign wrote:Well it looks pretty good already. Maybe no armor until lvl 1? Well, it's your call. Do what you think is best.
It shouldn't take too long to slap some armor on him, especially if it's the same kind the spearman wears, so np.
Fog wrote:Do you plan on implementing Rhyging's fire technique?
If I can figure out how to work the mask function in PSE, sure, why not? I'd like to try it out, and this seems like a perfect chance. I don't think it will mess with the TC, as long as the flames don't overlap the tunic.
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@artisticdude Actually, let's leave the armor for lvl 1. That way the archer and torcher will be some similar. Thanks!
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Re: Promised Land: Goblin Campaign

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Oh noez! Stop it already, would you? :P

I had just finished the armored version and was preparing to post it when I saw your message. Ah me. Well, I guess this will do as a start for the next level, eh? :lol2:
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Re: Promised Land: Goblin Campaign

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Well if that's the case, let's go on with whatever you were thinking. If have plans as I'm typing this post, just follow them. I don't really care, really. I trust your judgement. :D
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Re: Promised Land: Goblin Campaign

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Hi there! I am really liking your campaign, but on "Detour" I leveled up a rider but I got the error
game_error: Could not find the unit being advanced to: PL goblin lancer
I don't know to much about campaing making and everything else, so I assume that it is because you haven't made that unit yet? But I'm not sure. Maybe I screwed it up. :P Anyways, Great campaign! Keep up the awesome work.

Edit: Sorry, I think I put this on the wrong Thread.
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