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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by Frogger5 » March 12th, 2010, 11:23 pm

I think the smaller ones ok, but the bigger one, yer. Needs darker shading towards the bottom.
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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by SFault » March 13th, 2010, 5:23 pm

Frogger5 wrote:I think the smaller ones ok, but the bigger one, yer. Needs darker shading towards the bottom.
I darkened the lower part but I think it's too dark now.
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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by Frogger5 » March 15th, 2010, 5:35 am

Nooooooooooooo. Perfect. Contrast is your friend. Especially when working with round things.
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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by artisticdude » March 15th, 2010, 9:51 am

It's not too dark, actually I think you got it just right. :) This looks very neat, incidentally.
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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by SFault » March 28th, 2010, 8:56 am

I made a huge maggot (lv2). Bit fat and not too well shaped, bu still...
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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by JackBarber » March 28th, 2010, 4:47 pm

I think if it's that big it would have stopped being a maggot long ago...
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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by Vladcara » March 28th, 2010, 5:05 pm

These sprites are awesome. And the maggots rock-i thought you said you couldn't scratch-draw? A couple may make their way into my campaign (The Warpworld, Vampire themed) if that's alright with you.

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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by artisticdude » March 29th, 2010, 12:49 pm

This looks great, but I feel the outlines above are too dark. it kinda conflicts with the light direction somewhat, since it's very similar to the shade of the lower outline.
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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by dipseydoodle » March 31st, 2010, 4:44 pm

GREAT MAGGOTS! No but really those are amazingly good for a frankenstiener.
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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by SFault » April 1st, 2010, 9:07 am

Vladcara wrote:A couple may make their way into my campaign (The Warpworld, Vampire themed) if that's alright with you.
Sure, go ahead.

Here's a bit slimmer and hopefully more rounder version.

Edit: Fixed it a bit.
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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by SFault » April 5th, 2010, 11:40 am

Sorry for double post, but I noticed that I had screwed the TC's in some sprites. Here are correct colors.
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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by Frogger5 » April 6th, 2010, 9:32 pm

Niiiiice. :D
I think the maggot could use more texture though.
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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by iLeeT_PeeP » April 18th, 2010, 11:09 am

Wow alot of good stuff in this one...

Very nice work SFault. :wink:
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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by Zigg » April 20th, 2010, 3:44 pm

Can I have the grey Defaldor? ANimated if possible please?

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Re: SFault's franken art

Post by SFault » April 20th, 2010, 7:02 pm

Zigg wrote:Can I have the grey Defaldor? ANimated if possible please?
I guess all my stuff is under GPL, so feel free to use it. I would like know where my art is used though. Also, are you talking about the one in Group1 or Group2. I might actually make minimal animations for the first one, otherwise it's all up to you to do animation.

Btw: I will be posting some orc franks soon..
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