Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
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Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
This are my frankentsteined tribe members. I'm making them for a campaign I've just started, and I'm looking for some critique and suggestions.
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- Lv. 0-Tribal Hunter Levels up to Tribal Archer or Tribal Warrior.
- tribal_hunter.png (1.33 KiB) Viewed 3835 times
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- Lv. 1-Tribal Archer
- tribal_bowman.png (1.41 KiB) Viewed 4047 times
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- Lv. 2-Tribal Pillager Levels up to Tribal Marauder
- tribal_marauder.png (3.02 KiB) Viewed 4179 times
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- Lv. 1-Tribal Shaman
- tribal_healer.png (2.05 KiB) Viewed 4179 times
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- Lv. 4-Tribal Chieftain
- tribal_cheitan.png (1.63 KiB) Viewed 4179 times
Last edited by someone on January 31st, 2010, 7:31 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
Sorry for double post, But there is more it wouldn't let me put in.
EDIT:Forgot to add this guy in:
EDIT:Forgot to add this guy in:
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- Lv. 1-Tribal Warrior Levels up to Tribal Pillager
- tribal_warrior_bighead.png (3.12 KiB) Viewed 3835 times
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- Lv. 3-Tribal Marauder
- tribal_pilliger.png (3.19 KiB) Viewed 4042 times
Last edited by someone on January 31st, 2010, 7:32 pm, edited 3 times in total.
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You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
All the heads are the same. Therefore, they don't match all the bodies. I have nothing else, fankies are hard to critique. 
Nice work though, good start! 
Nice work though, good start! My spritework can be seen here.
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Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
My comment would be that the heads seem small in relation to the rest of the body.
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Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
indeed
My spritework can be seen here.
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Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
I'll see what I can do about the heads.
EDIT: Bowman with edited head.
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EDIT: Bowman with edited head.
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- Does he work down here?
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Last edited by someone on January 8th, 2010, 11:13 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
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Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
Umm...?someone wrote:New:
"I'm never wrong. One time I thought I was wrong, but I was mistaken."
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
Meaning what?Umm...?
I think I'll try giving them bare chests when the head problem is over.
Last edited by someone on January 8th, 2010, 11:01 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
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Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
The second image in your previous post does not show correctly.
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Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
There is only one picture.
EDIT: Aww, thespaceinvader got his post in seconds before me,,,
EDIT: Aww, thespaceinvader got his post in seconds before me,,,
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
Weird. It shows up fine on my screen.
Expanding Wesnoth
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
What is it saved as?
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
tribal_bowman.png
Expanding Wesnoth
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
He works now...
Re: Tribal Frankies for UMC; Constructive Criticism
That's good. Is it an improvement, or was he better before?
Expanding Wesnoth
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.
You are an Arch Mage - You're definitely intelligent, but some people would say you spend too much time inside. The power you have learned, however, is simply unmatched.