Aura's Sprite Realm - New 23/1/10, Amazon Spearwoman
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Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 5/9/09, Goblin Warlord
What parts have I pillowshaded on my evil faction ones ?
Here's a beastman spearwielder.
I know the spear is a bit bent but it makes him look more primitive.
Here's a beastman spearwielder.
I know the spear is a bit bent but it makes him look more primitive.
Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 7/9/09, Beastman
No, the bent spear did a great job of impressing on me that the spear was actually made of a bow without a string. Aside from that, you're improving very quickly, but the guy's arm without the bowspear seems a bit crumpled.
Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 7/9/09, Beastman
Ok, I fixed the spear. I also made an upgrade.
Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 7/9/09, Beastman
First one, good. Second one, not so good. By covering up his muscles you've lost a lot of "professionality" in the sprite, making it look a bit cluttered and more noobish. Don't think of the armor piece thingies as flat, they have to conform to the guy's body.
Also, if he's holding a hatchet, I can't really tell if it is a hatchet.
Also, if he's holding a hatchet, I can't really tell if it is a hatchet.
Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 7/9/09, Beastman
I'll redo him without the necklace (but I'll keep the leather harness), a better helm, new horns, and a better axe.
I made an archer, I'll probably redo his horns though.
I made an archer, I'll probably redo his horns though.
Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 7/9/09, Beastman
raise the leftmost dark eye pixel, i cant help the impression he's cute-smiling right now
Like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick ass with!
Don't like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick their asses! So everyone's happy :)
Felinian faction is part of the Beyond Southern Hells era
kitties need sprites! art topic here
Don't like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick their asses! So everyone's happy :)
Felinian faction is part of the Beyond Southern Hells era
kitties need sprites! art topic here
Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 7/9/09, Beastman
I've added another black pixel there instead. Will post the fixed version when I have a new unit to show.
Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 7/9/09, Beastman
Just wondering..do you have any specific plan or purpose for this spritemaking?
..just wondering if i could trick you into cat people
..just wondering if i could trick you into cat people
Like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick ass with!
Don't like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick their asses! So everyone's happy :)
Felinian faction is part of the Beyond Southern Hells era
kitties need sprites! art topic here
Don't like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick their asses! So everyone's happy :)
Felinian faction is part of the Beyond Southern Hells era
kitties need sprites! art topic here
Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 7/9/09, Beastman
I could have a go if you want, later on.
Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 7/9/09, Beastman
In an attempt to get an oriental faction made, I went on a graphics library raid and made some edits. Here are the results (unfinished). The Peasant Swordsman, Lesser Oni, Samurai Warrior, Sky Drake, and Unbound Oni are all unedited.
If anyone wants to use them as a base for ideas/edits for an Asian faction, go ahead.
If anyone wants to use them as a base for ideas/edits for an Asian faction, go ahead.
Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 7/9/09, Beastman
the samurai are great! but the breastplates need some work, especially on the warrior, not sure if that's a belt but it's going up too high and covering the plate. I propose looking over the net at how samurai armor looks like irl too
the recolor on the big demon hurts it a lot comparing to the original im afraid
did the original raid loot have shields? i don't recall a shield on any samurai image so far, it doesn't fit their fighting style
the recolor on the big demon hurts it a lot comparing to the original im afraid
did the original raid loot have shields? i don't recall a shield on any samurai image so far, it doesn't fit their fighting style
Like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick ass with!
Don't like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick their asses! So everyone's happy :)
Felinian faction is part of the Beyond Southern Hells era
kitties need sprites! art topic here
Don't like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick their asses! So everyone's happy :)
Felinian faction is part of the Beyond Southern Hells era
kitties need sprites! art topic here
Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 7/9/09, Beastman
They didn't have shields, but I think they look cooler with them and as this a fantasy game, I reckon it could pass.
I know the daemon looks a bit off, but I don't think it looks that bad.
I will try and fix the samurai armour though.
I know the daemon looks a bit off, but I don't think it looks that bad.
I will try and fix the samurai armour though.
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Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 7/9/09, Beastman
Going to a spear and shield in the final upgrade doesn't make much sense, its inconsistent to the unit tree and inconsistent with Samurai lore.Aura wrote:They didn't have shields, but I think they look cooler with them and as this a fantasy game, I reckon it could pass.
I know the daemon looks a bit off, but I don't think it looks that bad.
I will try and fix the samurai armour though.
I'd just try to make a fancier level 2 instead of changing the weapon, unless you have a really compelling reason
Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 7/9/09, Beastman
Lesser Oni looks like an L0 unit but Unbound Oni looks like L3
Oni looks like an L1 or L2 unit but Greater Oni looks like an L4
Oni looks like an L1 or L2 unit but Greater Oni looks like an L4
http://www.wesnoth.org/wiki/User:Sapient... "Looks like your skills saved us again. Uh, well at least, they saved Soarin's apple pie."
Re: Aura's Sprite Realm - New 7/9/09, Beastman
I see what you mean about the Oni, but I'm going to leave them for now to work on these, pirates.
They are edits from stuff found in the library, I hope to add some more later. Comments on these ?
They are edits from stuff found in the library, I hope to add some more later. Comments on these ?