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Re: Steelhive Graphics- I ar tird of robotz so I maek rndom stuf
It's a possibility, though I might have to name them something other than "Lizardmen" to be somewhat original. Or Totems. I was considering making a Totem faction.
Oh bugger. Now you've activated my Imagination Hyperdrive Engine. Be prepared for monstrosities later.
Oh bugger. Now you've activated my Imagination Hyperdrive Engine. Be prepared for monstrosities later.
Re: Steelhive Graphics- I ar tird of robotz so I maek rndom stuf
If you have around a billion different faction ideas (i know i do) then why don't you just make a faction that was created by an incredibly insane hermit who animated all his ideas and made them fight for him? With a totem here, a lizardman there and a wose transport somewhere else?
The only flaw i can see with your warrior is how the pink part of the blade doesn't quite match the metal part. i know it's supposed to be like that but it's just a little too far off in my opinion. also, his right foot (on our left) makes him look like he's standing in a weird position, with his toes facing outwards.
And then there's the shadow: this one doesn't matter so much, but i just thought i'd point it out: wesnoth shadows are 50% opacity (i think) and yours aren't. His shadow could stand to be little longer too.
The only flaw i can see with your warrior is how the pink part of the blade doesn't quite match the metal part. i know it's supposed to be like that but it's just a little too far off in my opinion. also, his right foot (on our left) makes him look like he's standing in a weird position, with his toes facing outwards.
And then there's the shadow: this one doesn't matter so much, but i just thought i'd point it out: wesnoth shadows are 50% opacity (i think) and yours aren't. His shadow could stand to be little longer too.
Re: Zero's art. Steelhive on hold now.
It is a shark. Not my best work, I know. Just wanted to try out something new. IMO it kinda worked, kinda didn't.
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Re: Zero's art. Steelhive on hold now.
Okay yeah. That shark was sucky. Oh well. I also made another lizard dude. Maybe I'll switch his burning sword/metal stick thingy for a normal burning stick and call it a Lv2.
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Re: Zero's art. Steelhive on hold now.
the only thing wrong with the shark is the tail fin, IMO. oh, i think it needs a mouth too.
for the knife and knife on fire lizardmen the arm holding the weapon is a bit indistinct, and the position of it seems to be kind of weird. try putting it in the same position as the lvl 1.
i suggest giving one of the lvl 2 options (or maybe a lvl1) a spear. the knife without fire lizardman seems as if he could be holding one without much of a position change.also, these guys don't look advanced enough to be able to make or even use a sword. i suggest you stick with clubs, torches and spears/pointy sticks.
also: i have a few art ideas if you ever run out.
for the knife and knife on fire lizardmen the arm holding the weapon is a bit indistinct, and the position of it seems to be kind of weird. try putting it in the same position as the lvl 1.
i suggest giving one of the lvl 2 options (or maybe a lvl1) a spear. the knife without fire lizardman seems as if he could be holding one without much of a position change.also, these guys don't look advanced enough to be able to make or even use a sword. i suggest you stick with clubs, torches and spears/pointy sticks.
also: i have a few art ideas if you ever run out.
Re: Zero's art. Steelhive on hold now.
Yes! I love this. You could use a shaman or something. And maybe a netter->javelin thrower->firespitter for ranged options.Zerovirus wrote:Okay yeah. That shark was sucky. Oh well. I also made another lizard dude. Maybe I'll switch his burning sword/metal stick thingy for a normal burning stick and call it a Lv2.
Re: Zero's art. Steelhive on hold now.
I'd rather get pointing at the right leg (left from the lizzies point of view) than the arm, there's a little thing that makes it look like the leg was straight but with some weird lump instead of 3-part animalistic like on lev 1 and 3
hmm did you make the flame yourself? if so maybe you could try making some burning rats? the attempt currently availible on the workshop is..overflamey
hmm did you make the flame yourself? if so maybe you could try making some burning rats? the attempt currently availible on the workshop is..overflamey
Like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick ass with!
Don't like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick their asses! So everyone's happy :)
Felinian faction is part of the Beyond Southern Hells era
kitties need sprites! art topic here
Don't like cats? I've made a whole faction of them to kick their asses! So everyone's happy :)
Felinian faction is part of the Beyond Southern Hells era
kitties need sprites! art topic here
Re: Zero's art. Steelhive on hold now.
Who wants a golden spaceship? For free! (looks at the Thunderstone thread)
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Re: Zero's art. Steelhive on hold now.
What, nobody wants golden stuff?
Well here's more stuff. Have fun with a shiny new Dwarven Music Golem.
It has a Trombone-Clarinet-flute gun arm that shoots waves of dazzlingly awesome music, and its control board is the keyboard of an organ. Oh, and its legs are violin things attached to microphones (for teh Karaoke).
Well here's more stuff. Have fun with a shiny new Dwarven Music Golem.
It has a Trombone-Clarinet-flute gun arm that shoots waves of dazzlingly awesome music, and its control board is the keyboard of an organ. Oh, and its legs are violin things attached to microphones (for teh Karaoke).
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Re: Zero's art. Steelhive on hold now.
wow. my music teacher would ride this to school if it ever came out on the market.
it looks like a dwarvish meca to me, if you de-musicafy it. also, gold is an impracticle metal for any kind of spaceship or weapon or anything, because it's too darn soft and expensive. i suppose white gold would work though, but it still seems like a waste of money when you could use steel or whatever.
it looks like a dwarvish meca to me, if you de-musicafy it. also, gold is an impracticle metal for any kind of spaceship or weapon or anything, because it's too darn soft and expensive. i suppose white gold would work though, but it still seems like a waste of money when you could use steel or whatever.
Re: Zero's art. Steelhive on hold now.
this looks so cool!
you could create the "era of stuff" with this ideas.
this could be the "music golem" from the "music dwarves" faction.
you could create the "era of stuff" with this ideas.
this could be the "music golem" from the "music dwarves" faction.
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Re: Zero's art. Steelhive on hold now.
Awesome stuff!! I've soooooo gotta save that
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Re: Zero's art. Steelhive on hold now.
First, gold looks cool. Second, how does the idea of a robot warmech that uses music as a weapon make any more sense than a gold-plated mecha?wesfreak wrote:wow. my music teacher would ride this to school if it ever came out on the market.
it looks like a dwarvish meca to me, if you de-musicafy it. also, gold is an impracticle metal for any kind of spaceship or weapon or anything, because it's too darn soft and expensive. i suppose white gold would work though, but it still seems like a waste of money when you could use steel or whatever.
Re: Zero's art. Steelhive on hold now.
And thirdly, gold isn't the only metal that can be that color. Especially when it comes to sci-fi stuff.Zerovirus wrote:First, gold looks cool. Second, how does the idea of a robot warmech that uses music as a weapon make any more sense than a gold-plated mecha?wesfreak wrote:wow. my music teacher would ride this to school if it ever came out on the market.
it looks like a dwarvish meca to me, if you de-musicafy it. also, gold is an impracticle metal for any kind of spaceship or weapon or anything, because it's too darn soft and expensive. i suppose white gold would work though, but it still seems like a waste of money when you could use steel or whatever.