Widder's artwork/Dibujos mÃos (Goblin spearman/lancero)
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Widder's artwork/Dibujos mÃos (Goblin spearman/lancero)
Hola, me ofreceria para hacer ilustraciones para los personajes, para donde sale las caracteristicas de cada uno y podria hacer algun dibujo para alguna campaña si interesa.
Only Speak Spanish sorry
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Lancero Goblin/ Spearman Goblin ?
Translation (by Shadow Master)
> Hi, I volunteer myself for making portraits for the game's characters,
> those that are used in their profiles; I could make some for campaigns if
> you are interested.
> I only speak Spanish, sorry about that.
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-- EDIT2: added translation
Only Speak Spanish sorry
.Lancero Goblin/ Spearman Goblin ?
Translation (by Shadow Master)
> Hi, I volunteer myself for making portraits for the game's characters,
> those that are used in their profiles; I could make some for campaigns if
> you are interested.
> I only speak Spanish, sorry about that.
-- EDIT: edited title.
-- EDIT2: added translation
Last edited by Widder on November 13th, 2007, 3:33 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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I hope someone can translate this...
You've got a good eye for detail, and good linework, but the anatomy's way off. The spear-arm seems to bend backwards at the shoulder, and the legs are very widely set. This is a bit awkward from an anatomy point of view, but it hurts the piece more because that pose would be VERY hard to sustain for a long period of time.
From a stylistic point of view, it's good, but it might be a little overly caricatured for Wesnoth. And the armour seems like it's far too good quality to belong to a level 1 goblin unit.
It looks great, thoguh.
You've got a good eye for detail, and good linework, but the anatomy's way off. The spear-arm seems to bend backwards at the shoulder, and the legs are very widely set. This is a bit awkward from an anatomy point of view, but it hurts the piece more because that pose would be VERY hard to sustain for a long period of time.
From a stylistic point of view, it's good, but it might be a little overly caricatured for Wesnoth. And the armour seems like it's far too good quality to belong to a level 1 goblin unit.
It looks great, thoguh.
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My translation:thespaceinvader wrote:You've got a good eye for detail, and good linework, but the anatomy's way off. The spear-arm seems to bend backwards at the shoulder, and the legs are very widely set. This is a bit awkward from an anatomy point of view, but it hurts the piece more because that pose would be VERY hard to sustain for a long period of time.
From a stylistic point of view, it's good, but it might be a little overly caricatured for Wesnoth. And the armour seems like it's far too good quality to belong to a level 1 goblin unit.
It looks great, thoguh.
Developer's note: This is an special case since the person contacted me in translations forum asking for help on how to post this if he didn't speak English at all. So any problems, contact me first.thespaceinvader <translated> wrote:El dibujo es bastante detallado, y el delineamiento es bastante bueno, pero la anatomÃa está muy mal. El brazo/lanza parece estar pegado por detrás del hombro, y las piernas están muy separadas entre sÃ. Es algo extraño desde un punto de vista anatómico, pero le hace más daño a la pieza de arte puesto que tal postura serÃa demasiado difÃcil de sostener (para el goblin) por un perÃodo largo de tiempo.
Desde un punto de vista estilÃstico, es bueno, pero quizá demasiado caricaturÃstico para Wesnoth. Y la armadura se ve de muy buena calidad para ser de un goblin de nivel 1.
Se ve genial, de todos modos.
edit: rewording in spanish.
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Muchas gracias.
I know a little spanish... But that's about it.
I know a little spanish... But that's about it.
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Perdona si te ago trabajar Shadow 
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Yo pense en hacer un dibujo bastante simplon por que e mirado los dibujos de los demas guerreros norteños y no son muy detallados yo creia que eso le pegava mas con el estilo del juego, pero puedo adaptarme a un estilo mas serio segun lo que me pidais. La verdad que el hombro del brazo que sostiene la lanza no me terminava de comvencer pero tampoco lo veia tan mal
Dejo aki un enlace a otra pagina donde tengo mas dibujos mios y el estilo que mas creeis que le pega lo puedo usar para hacer las ilustraciones de los personajes.
http://rolonline.foroactivo.com/Dibujos ... 67.htm#276
Translation to English by Shadow Master:
I decided to make a simplistic drawing because I have seen the portraits of other northern warriors, and they are not every detailed; I thought that this was the idea/style for the game, but I can adapt myself to a more serious style according to what you ask me. Actually, I did not completely like the shoulder of the arm that wields the spear, but I neither considered it too bad. :p
I leave here a link to another page, where there are more of my drawings, and I can use the style that you think fits better to make the character's portraits. http://rolonline.foroactivo.com/Dibujos ... 67.htm#276
Translation ends here.
. Yo pense en hacer un dibujo bastante simplon por que e mirado los dibujos de los demas guerreros norteños y no son muy detallados yo creia que eso le pegava mas con el estilo del juego, pero puedo adaptarme a un estilo mas serio segun lo que me pidais. La verdad que el hombro del brazo que sostiene la lanza no me terminava de comvencer pero tampoco lo veia tan mal
Dejo aki un enlace a otra pagina donde tengo mas dibujos mios y el estilo que mas creeis que le pega lo puedo usar para hacer las ilustraciones de los personajes.
http://rolonline.foroactivo.com/Dibujos ... 67.htm#276
Translation to English by Shadow Master:
I decided to make a simplistic drawing because I have seen the portraits of other northern warriors, and they are not every detailed; I thought that this was the idea/style for the game, but I can adapt myself to a more serious style according to what you ask me. Actually, I did not completely like the shoulder of the arm that wields the spear, but I neither considered it too bad. :p
I leave here a link to another page, where there are more of my drawings, and I can use the style that you think fits better to make the character's portraits. http://rolonline.foroactivo.com/Dibujos ... 67.htm#276
Translation ends here.
Last edited by Widder on October 12th, 2007, 3:49 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Not bad a bit cartoony though.
Your other stuff isn't bad either what's about coloring.
(Hopeful you can understand it, I could only offer it in German)
Your other stuff isn't bad either what's about coloring.
(Hopeful you can understand it, I could only offer it in German)
... all romantics meet the same fate someday
Cynical and drunk and boring someone in some dark cafe ...
All good dreamers pass this way some day
Hidin’ behind bottles in dark cafes
Cynical and drunk and boring someone in some dark cafe ...
All good dreamers pass this way some day
Hidin’ behind bottles in dark cafes
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Gracias Caeb.
Sobre el goblin, decir que tan solo es un dibujo hecho en poco rato, como e puesto en el link podeis ver mas dibujos mios y si interesa que yo haga dibujos, puedo intentar adaptarme al estilo que se necesite.
Ademas cuando dibujo un personaje necesito informacion sobre el, estoy dibujando personajes para un juego de unos amigos y cuando me piden un dibujo me dan informacion sobre como deve de ser, este goblin lo e dibujado mirando al goblin del juego y me resulta complicado ver exactamente como es por que es muy pequeño.
Quiero poder colaborar en las ilustraciones de los personajes que creo que no estan todas hechas. Por lo menos en la version del juego que tengo yo no lo estan.
Gracias y perdon por no escribir en ingles.
Translation to English by Shadow Master:
Thanks Caeb. About the goblin, I just wanted to say that it was a quick drawing that I made; as pointed in the link, you can see more of my drawings, and if you are interested on them, I can try to adapt to the proper style.
Besides, when I draw a character I need background information on it; I'm drawing characters for some friend's game, and when they ask me for a drawing they give me information on what it should look like. I drew this goblin based on the in-game sprites, so due to its small size, it is difficult for me to guess exactly what it should look like.
I'd like to contribute the character's portraits, that I think they have not been done (all of them) yet. At least, in the version that I have they aren't.
Thanks and my apologies for not writing in English.
Translation ends here.
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Sobre el goblin, decir que tan solo es un dibujo hecho en poco rato, como e puesto en el link podeis ver mas dibujos mios y si interesa que yo haga dibujos, puedo intentar adaptarme al estilo que se necesite.
Ademas cuando dibujo un personaje necesito informacion sobre el, estoy dibujando personajes para un juego de unos amigos y cuando me piden un dibujo me dan informacion sobre como deve de ser, este goblin lo e dibujado mirando al goblin del juego y me resulta complicado ver exactamente como es por que es muy pequeño.
Quiero poder colaborar en las ilustraciones de los personajes que creo que no estan todas hechas. Por lo menos en la version del juego que tengo yo no lo estan.
Gracias y perdon por no escribir en ingles.
Translation to English by Shadow Master:
Thanks Caeb. About the goblin, I just wanted to say that it was a quick drawing that I made; as pointed in the link, you can see more of my drawings, and if you are interested on them, I can try to adapt to the proper style.
Besides, when I draw a character I need background information on it; I'm drawing characters for some friend's game, and when they ask me for a drawing they give me information on what it should look like. I drew this goblin based on the in-game sprites, so due to its small size, it is difficult for me to guess exactly what it should look like.
I'd like to contribute the character's portraits, that I think they have not been done (all of them) yet. At least, in the version that I have they aren't.
Thanks and my apologies for not writing in English.
Translation ends here.
np
Last edited by Widder on October 12th, 2007, 3:55 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Ahem.Caeb wrote:when was the last time you saw a smart goblin...?
bienvenido al foro, Widder...
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Bienvenido Widder.
Si hacen falta, y muchos.
Dame un tiempo para revizar los que hacen falta, ya hubo otros dibujantes haciendo el mismo pedido. Jetryl es el Director de Arte, el sabe lo que hace falta, Si quieres le pregunto, mientras voy a buscar el tema en el que se pusieron los que faltaban.
Si tienes la version de desarrollo 1.3.8, entonces cualquiera que no este, me imagino que puedes trabajar con el.
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Me referia e este tema
Aun no me a contestado Jetryl, eso es lo que saque de aquel tema.
Si hacen falta, y muchos.
Dame un tiempo para revizar los que hacen falta, ya hubo otros dibujantes haciendo el mismo pedido. Jetryl es el Director de Arte, el sabe lo que hace falta, Si quieres le pregunto, mientras voy a buscar el tema en el que se pusieron los que faltaban.
Si tienes la version de desarrollo 1.3.8, entonces cualquiera que no este, me imagino que puedes trabajar con el.
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EDIT:
Me referia e este tema
Me parece que en Descent into Darkness ya se trabajo, podrias hacer ilustraciones de los principales caracteres de las otras campañas. O bien, de alguna unidad que no tenga en 1.3.8.Jetryl wrote: Los primeras podrian ser de las campañas que no las tienen, o que estan frankestenizadas (algunas campañas hacen sus ilustraciones editando otras ilustraciones). Dandole un vistazo (a mi version pasada 1.3.3), parece que las siguientes campañas necesitan ilustraciones, probablemente en este orden:
- Descent into Darkness
- Son of the Black Eye
- Two Brothers
Aun no me a contestado Jetryl, eso es lo que saque de aquel tema.
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Yo esperarÃa un poquillo a que aparezca la versión de Windows de la 1.3.9 que está en ciernes, ya que deberÃa aparecer pronto (bueno tan pronto como que alguien la suba, pero no suele tardar demasiado)Widder wrote:Gracias jdsampayo, voy a descargarme la version 1.3.8 si no es molestia podrias ir diciendome tu lo que se necesita? Es que yo no se ingles, uso una pagina que traduce los textos, pero no me entero de mucho.
Por cierto tu enano con escudo de los enlaces de tu galerÃa me ha encantado.
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