Demons and Imps, royal armies of hell - suggestions welcome
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The succubus looks like it's stabbing itself in the head. The legs look really skinny and the tail is hard seems like it doesn't match on the opposite sides of her legs.battlestar wrote:I reallize some of these is going to be hellish to animate.
lowered wings for gorgon and... succubus
Gorgon looks great though. I hope you don't change it any more. :p
(I mean, unless you can make it even BETTER)
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To me it looks like the tail isn't flowing naturally in response to gravity. ie. She'd have to be expending effort to hold it rigid at that height.battlestar wrote:what do you mean by tail is hard?
The style is markedly different between the two units. The Succubus looks like a 3D model.
Given the surrounding mythology it would be cool if the succubus' pose could be more sensual.
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lol...I meant to write "the tail is hard see how it connects." I totally didn't write any of those words!!! Sorry, lol. I think I had a phone call distract me as I was typing.battlestar wrote:what do you mean by tail is hard?
The second try is a lot better. One thing though, her right blade (on our left) doesn't look straight.
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There's something about how the sprites both seem to have gigantic eyes that make them seem slightly comical. Maybe shift the gorgon's eyes a little higher; they seem a little low right now.
As for the succubus, irrevenant is right. The succubus seems like a 3d model compared to the gorgon. I don't mind the tail so much, but it seems as though its thickness isn't consistent. It also seems to get in the way of the legs. I think if you made the succubus stand less stiffly (that's the word I'm thinking of!) and lean back on her legs a little (give her sort of a strutting pose), it'll give you the freedom to "show a little leg." That, and some more shading on the blades. They stick out like a sore thumb.
As for the succubus, irrevenant is right. The succubus seems like a 3d model compared to the gorgon. I don't mind the tail so much, but it seems as though its thickness isn't consistent. It also seems to get in the way of the legs. I think if you made the succubus stand less stiffly (that's the word I'm thinking of!) and lean back on her legs a little (give her sort of a strutting pose), it'll give you the freedom to "show a little leg." That, and some more shading on the blades. They stick out like a sore thumb.
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just a quick hack to point some things out.
1. The legs were really off. I think this was as to tell what was the tail, but that can be done by means of tonal values.
2. The arm loks too thin because you used to dark a color to outline the arms. It mixes with the color of the wings.
3. It was a bit too thin, the head, and body
1. The legs were really off. I think this was as to tell what was the tail, but that can be done by means of tonal values.
2. The arm loks too thin because you used to dark a color to outline the arms. It mixes with the color of the wings.
3. It was a bit too thin, the head, and body
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Hello,
Great work
For me the succubus looked better before last changes.
Why do you dress it so much ? I tried to modify ratio waist/hip for mor sensuality. First try on a work of somebody else. May I ?:roll:
Ok with pb of eyes of both images
Great work
For me the succubus looked better before last changes.
Why do you dress it so much ? I tried to modify ratio waist/hip for mor sensuality. First try on a work of somebody else. May I ?:roll:
Ok with pb of eyes of both images
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faites attention àl'eau !
Very good work!!
For the succubus maybe the color of the skin could be more like human skin (except for wings and tails).
A fast search in google show me all succubus like normal women but with red or black wings and tail. (And they look very nice :p)
This are the best for me, hope it helps:
http://data1.blog.de/blog/w/whitewarrio ... ccubus.jpg
from this one I like her feet, transformed to demon-like:
http://hoernle1.de/m/imagick6/montage/B ... ccubus.jpg
one more
http://www.wizards.com/dnd/images/alumn ... us_3rd.jpg
Maybe it gives you some ideas.
bytes.
For the succubus maybe the color of the skin could be more like human skin (except for wings and tails).
A fast search in google show me all succubus like normal women but with red or black wings and tail. (And they look very nice :p)
This are the best for me, hope it helps:
http://data1.blog.de/blog/w/whitewarrio ... ccubus.jpg
from this one I like her feet, transformed to demon-like:
http://hoernle1.de/m/imagick6/montage/B ... ccubus.jpg
one more
http://www.wizards.com/dnd/images/alumn ... us_3rd.jpg
Maybe it gives you some ideas.
bytes.
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