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brodiero500
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NEW bowman

Post by brodiero500 »

put your opinoins on this elder bowman that i created its the next lv up of master bowman and tell me if its all right :D
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Zhukov
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Post by Zhukov »

My opinion is: don't create more then one thread for the same picture.
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Post by Doc »

At least it's in the right place this time. That's progress.
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vampire

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the vampire that i have created might be bad in some prospectives but this is only a draft so give some ideas for it
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Post by grzywacz »

NO :?
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Post by torangan »

Compare your sprites to the one already in game. You've got far less details then those. If you want to learn how to improve you'll be pointed to tutorials most likely but you should recognize that your skill is not yet over the treshhold for potential inclusion. Wheter this changes in the future depends on you.
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Post by zookeeper »

Also, get a graphics program that can do .png transparency properly.

You might find some other useful reading on the http://www.wesnoth.org/wiki/Create_Art page, too.
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Post by Flarin »

The idea for the bowman is good but the shading is really bad.Good attempt though :) Use pixen if you have a mac gimp if you have a pc to make the units
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brodiero500
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Post by brodiero500 »

iv updated my elder bowman and still acepting opinions
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Post by brodiero500 »

please give opinoins
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Post by Neoriceisgood »

It's quite orange.
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Post by Jetrel »

Post all of your art in the "General Outcast" thread - e.g. in a single thread. Any others will be deleted without further explanation.

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