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Post by toms »

If you tell us what kind of units these are (mages, leaders, default melee-s,...?) we all do an easier job with finding names.
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Post by Gale »

the top one are fighter(sword one more to hero & the lance is more to leader)
the second is mage(as you can see, but the upper root are more too "elemental melee" attack, the bottom one is more to healing and iluminating+strong holy ranged with no melee[for additional information, the bottom root is holding crystal prism])
i will add archer and scout later
are they are good or bad?
um.... the faction name...... how about Hunters?
EDIT: after i ask my bro...
the fighter tree
Infantry--Slasher--Swordmaster
+++++--(Lance) Captain--[Hunter] Leader
Hunter mage--Fighter mage--Frostblade
++++++++++++++--Dracomancer
+++++--Flash mage--Holy mage
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no comment?

Post by Gale »

here's the scout, how it's looks? good or bad, please tell me how to improve it
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Re: no comment?

Post by highhole »

Gale wrote:here's the scout, how it's looks? good or bad, please tell me how to improve it
IMO it looks nice.
The hads/helmets looks funny. :)
Try to set them a bit down.
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Post by jg »

Very nice... but try and change the pose of the "adventurer" a little. IMO he looks too similar to the Explorer...

jg
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Post by Gale »

instead of changing adventurer, i'm changing the explorer
the upper unit in the tree are special unit, the first and the second have big difference(you will know later when you play my campaign, but it not started yet :( )
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how its looks?? weird?
how its looks?? weird?
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lol i'm waiting for the comment for this gg
lol i'm waiting for the comment for this gg
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purple?
purple?
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so far this is it.. i'm wondering what bow-user-job name that exist<br />and the bowman looks weird
so far this is it.. i'm wondering what bow-user-job name that exist
and the bowman looks weird
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Post by appleide »

They all look very good! The only problem (besides those big weapons, for example the guy holding that lance-like sword... and the other huge swords held on the first page.), is that all the faces look the same, this makes them a little too alilke to each other, as the most differentiating aspect between different people are their faces. Eg, when you think about your relatives/classmates/colleagues you think of their faces.

Really like your "Godlike Overlord" It looks so cool, even if it is exaggerated. it might even be cooler if he had some sort of halo around him.... :twisted:

Some hats look like they aren't suitable for the unit. The third base level one from the top on the unit-tree for example. It looks like a steel hat on a person wearing normal clothes. The red wings don't look 'connected' to that image of a person properly.

But Good Job :D I look forward to see them finished!
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Post by Copybass »

I love the overlord, and all the units in that tree. I dont care if they are overdone, they look SO cool
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Post by Gale »

@appleide
i don't have idea for their face :? and what to do with it, add a beard?

:lol: i'm thinking the halo that's fit with that unit just wait and see :wink:

oops :roll: , i will fix it, maybe changes normal clothes to armor or helm to hat

@Copybass
lol really?

i can't work today cause i'm lacking of time, maybe tommorow i have time to remake and edit some units
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Post by appleide »

Gale wrote:@appleide
i don't have idea for their face :? and what to do with it, add a beard?
Well, I am not sure... :? But, for the magical line level 3s, you may as well make them look a little older. Their faces make them look like they are nineteen year olds. And for the other faces... Could try changing color of hair/eyes/mouth? Not sure about the best way to make faces...
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dragon knight

Post by Gale »

give comment please
which better? v2 or v1?(the different is on their shoulder armor)
oh yeah i think they must have shoulder armor like the drake slayer up there(the size)or give the shoulder armor claw.
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Post by toms »

The first dragonknight who steals his dragon the weapon... :P

WINR, but when it is somewhere possible to be realistic, it should be. Even if the sword were made of aluminium, it´d weight quite a lot...
And the way how he is holding it would break his hand.

Just my 2 cents...
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Post by Gale »

please give comment for this to :P
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upgraded overlord, big armor will not balanced with small weapon... so... here it is, mwahahahahaha
upgraded overlord, big armor will not balanced with small weapon... so... here it is, mwahahahahaha
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Post by highhole »

IMO it looks to much overpowered.
Nice little sword. :P
Looks funny when the sword is three times bigger than the head...

Oh this message was thought to the dragonknight...
But it fits here, too. :P
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Post by toms »

Nice, as I like blades. :)

It´s the right moment to use WML...( :P )
#define COMMENT_ABOUT_THE_WEAPON
His sword is too large, that´s unrealistic and looks overdone.
#enddef
From now on I always use it when I need. :D (this time you already noticed it so I dont)
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