My art need critics

Gale · Post by **Gale** » April 22nd, 2006, 4:05 pm

Sapient wrote: All you need to add after that is a stringed handle extending down past his grip.

are that's really look like an instrument?? i can't imagine that...
too bad, tracker and bandit are taken, how about robber?

(maybe not cool)
oh yeah about the name.... i want like treasure hunter-like job name (not exactly tresure hunter,a thief maybe, but hunt something bigger than ordinary thief)
please comment this one,i think i must make the armor thiner and improvement(and the head is need swaping)

Mortles · Post by **Mortles** » April 22nd, 2006, 4:13 pm

Bounty hunter? That is good name.

Gale · Post by **Gale** » April 22nd, 2006, 4:34 pm

now i need help

i need flute image (wesnotish style) that fit with this

Jester · Post by **Jester** » April 22nd, 2006, 4:49 pm

Gale wrote:now i need help i need flute image (wesnotish style) that fit with this

Uhh... try to make it yourself? That's often a good option...

Gale · Post by **Gale** » April 23rd, 2006, 12:25 am

ok i'll make it my self, so how about this?
i make a soul hunter and it's flying please givesome comment n suggestion

Gale · Post by **Gale** » April 23rd, 2006, 12:49 am

i need another comment for this beggar

Stilgar · Post by **Stilgar** » April 23rd, 2006, 1:40 am

I'm guessing the beggar's hat is meant to be a straw hat, but it looks to me to be too brightly colored to go with the rest of his stuff. You might also try adding rips and/or patches in his clothes if you want to increase the poor look, but you don't necessarily have to.

-> What i might be working on · Post by **Eleazar** » April 23rd, 2006, 3:21 am

Gale wrote:i have some unit, please give critcism and suggestion for their name

Could you explain what you are trying to do?
create unit art for fun?
add new units to the mainline?
make your own units, faction, or campaign?

Gale · Post by **Gale** » April 23rd, 2006, 4:16 am

i make this all for my campaign (and for fun)
when all unit that i need already done, i will make them
and hard to adding some rips and patches on small images

Gale · Post by **Gale** » April 23rd, 2006, 5:10 am

fixing some of the image( but i still figuring out what to do with top centre sword, please someoen tell me)

highhole · Post by **highhole** » April 23rd, 2006, 6:23 am

You could call your overlord overarmored

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Gale · Post by **Gale** » April 23rd, 2006, 7:51 am

lol you'r right here's series of the overlord(simple and overarmored)

Dragon Master · Post by **Dragon Master** » April 23rd, 2006, 12:04 pm

Without the wings he's very good. With the wings I'd have to say you would have to call him "Angelic Overlord" or "Godlike Overlord" to emphasize that he's godly so he can lift all that armor.

-> What i might be working on · Post by **Eleazar** » April 23rd, 2006, 1:26 pm

Gale wrote:i make this all for my campaign (and for fun)
when all unit that i need already done, i will make them
and hard to adding some rips and patches on small images

Your style is more extreme than the normal Wesnoth style (crazy big weapons, etc.) but that's OK if you are making your own campaign.
Your art is pretty well done.

Gale · Post by **Gale** » April 24th, 2006, 4:13 pm

i have finished half of faction, that i will use for my campaign, here it's, they have no name(i'm searching for it,if you have, please help)
EDIT: it's only half of 1 faction, maybe i will create other,(and not a jumbo army in one faction, only a little faction)

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