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Gale
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Post by Gale » April 22nd, 2006, 4:05 pm

Sapient wrote: All you need to add after that is a stringed handle extending down past his grip.

:shock:
are that's really look like an instrument?? i can't imagine that...
too bad, tracker and bandit are taken, how about robber? :lol: (maybe not cool)
oh yeah about the name.... i want like treasure hunter-like job name (not exactly tresure hunter,a thief maybe, but hunt something bigger than ordinary thief)
please comment this one,i think i must make the armor thiner and improvement(and the head is need swaping)
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this is it, but the head look strange with that armor
this is it, but the head look strange with that armor
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Post by Mortles » April 22nd, 2006, 4:13 pm

Bounty hunter? That is good name.
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Gale
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Post by Gale » April 22nd, 2006, 4:34 pm

now i need help :( i need flute image (wesnotish style) that fit with this
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only for the base, i will edit it later
only for the base, i will edit it later
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Post by Jester » April 22nd, 2006, 4:49 pm

Gale wrote:now i need help :( i need flute image (wesnotish style) that fit with this
Uhh... try to make it yourself? That's often a good option...
I heard they were stoned out of their minds, trying to convince the Statue of Liberty to get naked...

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Post by Gale » April 23rd, 2006, 12:25 am

ok i'll make it my self, so how about this?
i make a soul hunter and it's flying please givesome comment n suggestion
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are the flute good enough?
are the flute good enough?
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this is the soul hunter, how about its weapon?
this is the soul hunter, how about its weapon?
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Gale
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Post by Gale » April 23rd, 2006, 12:49 am

i need another comment for this beggar
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are its looks so poor?
are its looks so poor?
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Post by Stilgar » April 23rd, 2006, 1:40 am

I'm guessing the beggar's hat is meant to be a straw hat, but it looks to me to be too brightly colored to go with the rest of his stuff. You might also try adding rips and/or patches in his clothes if you want to increase the poor look, but you don't necessarily have to.

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Re: Need Criticism & suggestion

Post by Eleazar » April 23rd, 2006, 3:21 am

Gale wrote:i have some unit, please give critcism and suggestion for their name
Could you explain what you are trying to do?
create unit art for fun?
add new units to the mainline?
make your own units, faction, or campaign?
Feel free to PM me if you start a new terrain oriented thread. It's easy for me to miss them among all the other art threads.
-> What i might be working on
Attempting Lucidity

Gale
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Post by Gale » April 23rd, 2006, 4:16 am

i make this all for my campaign (and for fun)
when all unit that i need already done, i will make them
and hard to adding some rips and patches on small images

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Post by Gale » April 23rd, 2006, 5:10 am

fixing some of the image( but i still figuring out what to do with top centre sword, please someoen tell me)
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now what? overdoned armor that this unit can even lift it?
now what? overdoned armor that this unit can even lift it?
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i can't give him rips<br />and how about the new hat?(its look like musrhroom hat)
i can't give him rips
and how about the new hat?(its look like musrhroom hat)
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Post by highhole » April 23rd, 2006, 6:23 am

You could call your overlord overarmored :P .

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Post by Gale » April 23rd, 2006, 7:51 am

lol you'r right here's series of the overlord(simple and overarmored) :lol:
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edit:oops... the overlord attackmode are too overarweaponed with that armor here's the edit, little change on the L weapon
edit:oops... the overlord attackmode are too overarweaponed with that armor here's the edit, little change on the L weapon
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this is simpler with removed that steel wing
this is simpler with removed that steel wing
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muahahhahahha
muahahhahahha
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Post by Dragon Master » April 23rd, 2006, 12:04 pm

Without the wings he's very good. With the wings I'd have to say you would have to call him "Angelic Overlord" or "Godlike Overlord" to emphasize that he's godly so he can lift all that armor.

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Post by Eleazar » April 23rd, 2006, 1:26 pm

Gale wrote:i make this all for my campaign (and for fun)
when all unit that i need already done, i will make them
and hard to adding some rips and patches on small images
Your style is more extreme than the normal Wesnoth style (crazy big weapons, etc.) but that's OK if you are making your own campaign.
Your art is pretty well done.
Feel free to PM me if you start a new terrain oriented thread. It's easy for me to miss them among all the other art threads.
-> What i might be working on
Attempting Lucidity

Gale
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Post by Gale » April 24th, 2006, 4:13 pm

i have finished half of faction, that i will use for my campaign, here it's, they have no name(i'm searching for it,if you have, please help)
EDIT: it's only half of 1 faction, maybe i will create other,(and not a jumbo army in one faction, only a little faction)
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please give criticism :)
please give criticism :)
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