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yah, ok I ripped his left boot off an elvish archer... Sue meZhukov wrote: Nice boots.
Thanks JW.
I heard they were stoned out of their minds, trying to convince the Statue of Liberty to get naked...
CCBS - Compulsive Cat Biting Syndrome, when you know that kittens shouldn't have heads attached to their bodies.
CCBS - Compulsive Cat Biting Syndrome, when you know that kittens shouldn't have heads attached to their bodies.
Heh, it's alright. I only recognised them because I have been doing the same.
For a serious crit, his arms are a bit too short, especially the one holding the bow (I'm assuming you want basically human proportions). They make his pose look kind of unnatural. Although the more that I look...it may just be because his shirt is hard to distinguish from his arms. No way to tell what is shoulder and what is arm.
He could also do with having his waist raised a bit, at the moment he has a lot of stomach and little leg.
For a serious crit, his arms are a bit too short, especially the one holding the bow (I'm assuming you want basically human proportions). They make his pose look kind of unnatural. Although the more that I look...it may just be because his shirt is hard to distinguish from his arms. No way to tell what is shoulder and what is arm.
He could also do with having his waist raised a bit, at the moment he has a lot of stomach and little leg.
First off ide like to say that i love the new art, second i think that the arrows on the archer should be a bit bigger, judging by how long his or its arm is and how tall he is, the arrow should be about half a metre
[EDIT] Like this
[EDIT] Like this
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philosophers are always proved wrong
thanks mickyg
Ryorin, the last few weeks have been very stressfull with school, so I didn't have time to do anything back then. But I'm back now, summer break
Ryorin, the last few weeks have been very stressfull with school, so I didn't have time to do anything back then. But I'm back now, summer break
I heard they were stoned out of their minds, trying to convince the Statue of Liberty to get naked...
CCBS - Compulsive Cat Biting Syndrome, when you know that kittens shouldn't have heads attached to their bodies.
CCBS - Compulsive Cat Biting Syndrome, when you know that kittens shouldn't have heads attached to their bodies.
resurrection time:
Half Blood lvl2 archer
EDIT: Frankensteined another one, the Day Hunter lvl3 Lawfull archer
Half Blood lvl2 archer
EDIT: Frankensteined another one, the Day Hunter lvl3 Lawfull archer
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I heard they were stoned out of their minds, trying to convince the Statue of Liberty to get naked...
CCBS - Compulsive Cat Biting Syndrome, when you know that kittens shouldn't have heads attached to their bodies.
CCBS - Compulsive Cat Biting Syndrome, when you know that kittens shouldn't have heads attached to their bodies.