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Jester wrote:Thin Blood, lvl 1 archer
Ah, a nice monthly resurrection! Neat sprite.
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Zhukov wrote::P Nice boots.
yah, ok I ripped his left boot off an elvish archer... Sue me :P

Thanks JW.
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;) Heh, it's alright. I only recognised them because I have been doing the same.

For a serious crit, his arms are a bit too short, especially the one holding the bow (I'm assuming you want basically human proportions). They make his pose look kind of unnatural. Although the more that I look...it may just be because his shirt is hard to distinguish from his arms. No way to tell what is shoulder and what is arm.
He could also do with having his waist raised a bit, at the moment he has a lot of stomach and little leg.
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Is this better?
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Post by Zhukov »

Yep.
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First off ide like to say that i love the new art, second i think that the arrows on the archer should be a bit bigger, judging by how long his or its arm is and how tall he is, the arrow should be about half a metre

[EDIT] Like this
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Post by Ryorin »

Thought we'd never hear from jester again regarding the Vampires.
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thanks mickyg

Ryorin, the last few weeks have been very stressfull with school, so I didn't have time to do anything back then. But I'm back now, summer break :D
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His skin's shadows are kinda hard to see. Makes him look a little flat...
Here's a tweaky:
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Post by JW »

If the bow were defined a little more (give it a harder front edge) I think it would be an A+ sprite. Right now it's at an A-.
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I think we should change his shirt's color, so it dosen't blend so much with his flesh tone.
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By more defined do you mean like the first or the second
and personally i like the shirt because of its transparency
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Post by Jester »

resurrection time:
Half Blood lvl2 archer

EDIT: Frankensteined another one, the Day Hunter lvl3 Lawfull archer
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Post by JW »

Cool. I was going to release another mini-update last night for the EOM but got lazy.

These will be a nice addition. 8)
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Post by Redeth »

Weird... I fail to see any resemblance to a vampire in these sprites... instead they keep reminding me of the teenage mutant ninja turtles. Oh well, never mind that, it's probably just me :(
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