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Shadow Master wrote:At least it will make these guys way more popular.

...and rightly so. Everyone knows javelineers are 1337...

I'm not entirely sure what's going on below his waist... there seems to be a bunch of angled lines. Maybe flats will fix it

Edited because I spail at felling.

I screwed around with it, and didn't like where it was going, so I fixed up the lines, inked them per kitty's dandy tutorial, and put in flats. It's the first time I've inked lines freehand - do they make sense? The two lightsources are the cones, the one on the left being the primary source. The co...

The legs on the second and third ones (from the left) look too smoothly bent - the knees on the first one seem more fitting. Also, the shading on the "spandex" makes them appear to just out a bit, intensifying the affect that they're somehow on top of the rest of the sprite. Just my $.02

You probably want to avoid absolutely vertical or horizontal lines for any distance (over three pixels is my personal rule of thumb), except for spears and the like. The king has a lot of vertical lines.

I always assumed that 3D models were big files... but I suppose not. And you're right, the music was abysmal and repetitive bad techno.

Hmph. I was wondering why it got so big... that would make sense with all the new portraits and stuff. It's weird cuz there's a first person shooter game I used to play that was about 300mb and had _really_ insanely good graphics for an open source mod.

So, it might be a good idea to somehow indicate that there is water below her - it'd make the recognizing the water light reflection easier - but yes, it works as it is currently. You could make her have some water droplets on her lower half, presumably having splashed onto her at some point :hmm:

Haven't changed the wing tip, but have fiddled with the front of (his right) the left wing. How's it look? C&C on the other additions would be nice too...

About the dwarf lord: is it me, or does it look like the axe blades are at a 60/120 degree angle to each other, not a 180/180 degree one?

@turuk: I'll fiddle with it - I think the lines give that impression, and once it's shaded they will be redone - but I think that I can make it clearer through the flats too.

@mnewton: I think it looks nice. Some birds look like that too - http://www.infovisual.info/02/photo/Eagle%20beak.html

^yeah...

I fiddled and shaded. Good or bad?

Mmmm. Ginger beer. Mmmm.

But yeah, turin, are you stalked frequently?

This should probably be in Art Workshop, not contrib... anyway... The hammer seems to be in weird perspective, sort of unaligned with the hand holding it. IMO it should come out toward the camera/viewer more. The shield could also be a bit bigger. Looks pretty fierce, though. Unlike many frankies, t...

Epic ginger beard!

(assuming you're looking for commentary) 1. His head looks, IMO, a teeny bit too small 2. The goatee and scarf line up in a funny way that suggests a strange long beard - I suppose this may be fixed by color. 3. The sword looks a bit short (the one he's holding), and it seems to come out towards the...