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by Pewskeepski
April 1st, 2013, 3:27 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.
Replies: 65
Views: 10704

Re: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.

Minor stuff, really. Mostly, tweaking the flow of the dialog and some of the elf's arguments (their overall behaviour is fine). Here goes for Towards the caves: Glindur: Surrender dwarves, I know you have the ruby! My army is numerous and will bring me that stone whether or not you cooperate, so wh...
by Pewskeepski
March 26th, 2013, 11:07 pm
Forum: WML Workshop
Topic: Trouble with storing units
Replies: 2
Views: 388

Re: Trouble with storing units

Oh wow, I literally would've tried that next. Guess I gave up to early. Anyway, thanks :P
by Pewskeepski
March 26th, 2013, 9:17 pm
Forum: WML Workshop
Topic: Trouble with storing units
Replies: 2
Views: 388

Trouble with storing units

So in my campaign, The Fall of Wesnoth, there's a part where the player's army is separated in two. The units you recruit in scenario 4 go with you to scenario 6 (scenario 5 is a talk scenario that doesn't feature the player's character), which you can't recruit in. The units that remain on your rec...
by Pewskeepski
March 26th, 2013, 7:33 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.
Replies: 65
Views: 10704

Re: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.

Ok, good! I might still propose some changes in scenarios 2-3, especially the dialog of the elves. What exactly? They're suppose to sound less disciplined and more roguish in the way they speak, since they've become ruthless under Landar's banner. I've gone through some more scenarios and made littl...
by Pewskeepski
March 15th, 2013, 12:40 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.
Replies: 65
Views: 10704

Re: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.

On a side note, I'm getting worried that now the characters are refering too much to the passing of time. A lasting impression from reading these last two scenarios is that they're always going "fifteen years this, fifteen years that". It wouldn't hurt to do a second reading with this in mind and s...
by Pewskeepski
March 13th, 2013, 10:30 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.
Replies: 65
Views: 10704

Re: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.

Wow, your epilogue is a lot better than mine :) Regarding Durnstorn's will to forsake the sceptre, I agree. It might sound more plausible if he wished to rush out against all odds and meet the elves in battle, especially if you consider his bloodthirsty behaviour in earlier scenarios. Naturally such...
by Pewskeepski
February 27th, 2013, 4:15 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.
Replies: 65
Views: 10704

Re: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.

I swapped out 'energy' for 'immortality', is that better? I also changed a few semi-colons to periods so they wouldn't be so overused.
by Pewskeepski
January 28th, 2013, 11:42 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.
Replies: 65
Views: 10704

Re: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.

Eh, I forgot about it too. But I did a quick search to find that it's all still on my computer so I'm ready :)
by Pewskeepski
September 2nd, 2012, 8:29 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.
Replies: 65
Views: 10704

Re: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.

Oh wow, I thought everyone forgot about this :P

Well I'm still interested in this, and I can still modify anything that needs to be tweaked.
by Pewskeepski
August 26th, 2012, 6:58 pm
Forum: Scenario & Campaign Development
Topic: The Fall of Wesnoth - Version 1.0.8 Released!
Replies: 65
Views: 13937

Re: The Fall of Wesnoth - Version 1.0.8 Released!

Prince of Evil is one of the few scenarios where I am really happy to escape. (From my already limited army I lost 3 precious L3 units and several others here - probably the problem was increased by triggering the final enemy quite early with a footpad running ahead.) I killed the final leader (not...
by Pewskeepski
August 26th, 2012, 1:57 am
Forum: Art Contributions
Topic: LordBob's commissionned work
Replies: 683
Views: 147635

Re: LordBob's commissionned work

Maybe a more "noble" and proud posture ? This one doesn't look like he owns the place. Also he makes a very inelegant gesture with his right hand, maybe you can make up a more refined one? And it would look better if he rested his palm on the sword's pommel, than just grabbing it in his hand. Well,...
by Pewskeepski
June 18th, 2012, 8:51 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.
Replies: 65
Views: 10704

Re: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.

Sorry for taking so long with this one. But hey, it's done! There's probably going to be some necessary revisions, but the last scenario is complete!

And I have addressed all mistakes mentioned above.
by Pewskeepski
June 7th, 2012, 5:25 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.
Replies: 65
Views: 10704

Re: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.

Somehow a stray word "fare" slipped into the Shorbear file. Probably you typed it while you were trying to do a search and didn't notice it there. :doh: Oops, my bad :P Here's a review for the Dragon "help the elves end your injustice acts" help the elves to end your unjust acts "to it's final comp...
by Pewskeepski
June 2nd, 2012, 6:50 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.
Replies: 65
Views: 10704

Re: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.

Thanks. Fixed all the known mistakes. And attached a zip containing The Dragon and all the other updated files. In scenario 8, Khrakrahs doesn't talk anymore. I don't know much about Wesnothian lore concerning this, but I never liked the idea of dragons talking. I always thought that communicating a...
by Pewskeepski
May 31st, 2012, 5:42 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.
Replies: 65
Views: 10704

Re: SoF: Dialog & storyline revision.

Thanks. Wow I never realized there were so many mistakes. I'll have to be more careful in the future. And yeah, I'm trying to go easy on the semi-colons.

Attached fixed versions and will soon return with Scenario 8!