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by lotsofphil
June 5th, 2009, 1:05 pm
Forum: Delfador’s Memoirs
Topic: Scenario 3: Road to Weldyn
Replies: 22
Views: 8911

Re: Scenario Review: DM 3 - Road to Weldyn

(1) What difficulty levels have you played the scenario on? Medium (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? 6 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? Clear (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? It was fine. (5) What were your major chall...
by lotsofphil
June 5th, 2009, 1:04 pm
Forum: Delfador’s Memoirs
Topic: Scenario 2: This Valley Belongs to Me
Replies: 29
Views: 9877

Re: Scenario Review: DM 2 - This Valley Belongs to Me

(1) What difficulty levels have you played the scenario on? Medium (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? 3 (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? Clear. (4) How clear and interesting did you find the dialog and storyline of the scenario? Just fine for a beginning. (5) What were y...
by lotsofphil
June 5th, 2009, 1:03 pm
Forum: Delfador’s Memoirs
Topic: Scenario 1: Overture
Replies: 15
Views: 7962

Re: Scenario Review: DM 1 - Overture

Three suggestions: 1. Where it says "two things stand between that apprentice and the rank of mage," I think it sounds better to use "an apprentice" or "the apprentice." "That" indicates a specific apprentice and, from the context, there is none. 2. Having all 4 oracles say "it is well" is too much....
by lotsofphil
June 4th, 2009, 11:50 pm
Forum: Delfador’s Memoirs
Topic: Scenario 20: Prince of Wesnoth
Replies: 26
Views: 9407

Re: Scenario Review: DM 20 - Prince of Wesnoth

In this one and the next two, Delfador shouldn't say "No! I'm so young!" when he dies. He is not that young anymore.
by lotsofphil
June 4th, 2009, 12:37 am
Forum: Delfador’s Memoirs
Topic: Scenario 16: Dark Sky Over Weldyn
Replies: 14
Views: 5573

Re: Scenario Review: DM 16 - Dark Sky Over Weldyn

Just a tiny quibble with the dialog. It says "less than a handful of men returned" or something similar. I would say "only a handful." A handful of men is 3 or 4, right? Given that it started with most of the army, distinguishing between 4 (handful) and 2 (less than) seems pretty academic. I am very...
by lotsofphil
June 4th, 2009, 12:32 am
Forum: Delfador’s Memoirs
Topic: Scenario 15: Save the King
Replies: 33
Views: 11154

Re: Scenario Review: DM 15 - Save the King

(1) What difficulty levels have you played the scenario on? Easiest (2) How difficult did you find the scenario? (1-10) 0! (3) How clear did you find the scenario objectives? Unclear. I thought you had to kill all the enemies. Is it supposed to be just Zorlan? (4) How clear and interesting did you f...
by lotsofphil
May 5th, 2009, 9:01 pm
Forum: Users’ Forum
Topic: Typo in AOI - Wasteland
Replies: 2
Views: 436

Re: Typo in AOI - Wasteland

I added it to the SpellingMistakes page in the wiki. I think that is the right way for it to get fixed.

http://www.wesnoth.org/wiki/SpellingMis ... _Incursion
by lotsofphil
March 31st, 2009, 2:30 pm
Forum: Users’ Forum
Topic: Typo in AOI - Wasteland
Replies: 2
Views: 436

Typo in AOI - Wasteland

There is a typo in the Wasteland level of An Orcish Incursion. "Erlornas was near-certain would find orcs there." Looks like there should be a "they" in there. I don't know where/how to fix it, but this is one place where it is: http://svn.gna.org/viewcvs/wesnoth/trunk/data/campaigns/An_Orcish_Incur...