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by MarkoLeSerbe
July 31st, 2018, 3:13 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: ORC'ifying dialogue
Replies: 10
Views: 619

Re: ORC'ifying dialogue

Agressive? Sure they are, but intelligent? Hmmm I'm not so sure about that. Yes, some of them, typically the leaders can be smart tacticians and charismatic commanders, and there are also shamans who can't be denied intelligence, but does that mean Orcs in general are intelligent? I'd rather say not...
by MarkoLeSerbe
July 24th, 2018, 1:12 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)
Replies: 37
Views: 4131

Re: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)

Current state of the descriptions : Tauroch Rider : Taurochs are huge, hardened beasts of the desert, considered untamable by most surviving races. However, the elves' afinity with nature has allowed them to form an unlikely bond with these animals. While Taurochs can easily carry or pull heavy load...
by MarkoLeSerbe
July 20th, 2018, 9:26 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)
Replies: 37
Views: 4131

Re: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)

"Problematic case I created here... I didn't want to sound offensive by any means. My point was that these elves drew beauty partly from their bound to the fairie world, or at least, it gave them a part of mystery, inhuman and beautiful to the eye. If I remember correctly, such things were said abou...
by MarkoLeSerbe
July 19th, 2018, 6:17 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)
Replies: 37
Views: 4131

Re: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)

Tauroch rider :Taurochs are huge, hardened beasts of the desert, considered untamable by most surviving races. However, the elves' afinity with nature has allowed them to form an unlikely bond with these animals. While Taurochs can easily carry or pull heavy loads, their thick hides and unwavering r...
by MarkoLeSerbe
July 15th, 2018, 2:31 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)
Replies: 37
Views: 4131

Re: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)

Hello again, I'm finally back on this. As I said on discord, I've got other things to worry about, like graduating, way too long holidays,... but now it's over and I have 1,5 months to finish what I started long ago by now.
by MarkoLeSerbe
May 1st, 2018, 8:46 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)
Replies: 37
Views: 4131

Re: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)

Feeew, it takes time to completely revise such a big text, but it's worth it, and my latest drafts are finally available with some notes to explain the reasons of the changes (big thanks to Beetlenaut for helping me with my grammar, it's much appreciated)
by MarkoLeSerbe
May 1st, 2018, 8:43 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)
Replies: 37
Views: 4131

Re: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)

(Improvements and future descritpions will be added as I work) Tauroch Rider : I actually don't have much more to say about this one. I found it already fairly good. (Existing version : Taurochs are huge, hardened beasts of the desert, considered untamable by most surviving races. However, the elves...
by MarkoLeSerbe
April 30th, 2018, 8:11 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)
Replies: 37
Views: 4131

Re: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)

I'll be reworking the grammar and phrasing. I should verify in the older posts why there are so many errors... I think the forum has struggled to copy paste the old post ( I think it's that, I've already corrected 2-3 things that sounded like impossible errors, when suppressing the contractions)
by MarkoLeSerbe
April 29th, 2018, 8:44 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)
Replies: 37
Views: 4131

Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)

(Improvements and future descritpions will be added as I work) Tauroch Rider : I actually don't have much more to say about this one. I found it already fairly good. (Existing version : Taurochs are huge, hardened beasts of the desert, considered untamable by most surviving races. However, the elves...
by MarkoLeSerbe
April 21st, 2018, 8:06 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)
Replies: 37
Views: 4131

Re: New descriptions for the Quenoth Elves

Little thing I've noticed about the Quenoth Elves, some of them are lacking proper costs and retained the level 1 unit ones.
by MarkoLeSerbe
April 19th, 2018, 5:37 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)
Replies: 37
Views: 4131

Re: New descriptions for the Quenoth Elves

About that phrasing, my guess is that the previous writer wanted to use a kind of... poetic structure? I don't know...

Anyway, new descriptions coming this evening
by MarkoLeSerbe
April 18th, 2018, 1:40 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)
Replies: 37
Views: 4131

Re: First descriptions : Tauroch units

(emphasis mine) I think this phrasing is strange. To me it would make more sense to say something like "When mounted on a tauroch" or "From the back of a tauroch", depending on exactly what you intended. I'm actually not sure about this one but I'll follow the advice. "elve" is not valid, you need ...
by MarkoLeSerbe
April 17th, 2018, 8:50 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)
Replies: 37
Views: 4131

Re: New descriptions for the Quenoth Elves

I'll do it tomorrow, I promise.
by MarkoLeSerbe
April 17th, 2018, 8:03 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)
Replies: 37
Views: 4131

Re: First descriptions : Tauroch units

(Improvements and future descritpions will be added as I work) Tauroch Rider : I actually don't have much more to say about this one. I found it already fairly good. (Existing version : Taurochs are huge, hardened beasts of the desert, considered untamable by most surviving races. However, the elves...
by MarkoLeSerbe
April 16th, 2018, 4:02 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)
Replies: 37
Views: 4131

Descriptions for the Quenoth Elves (Finished drafts)

Ok, I've jumped again in Wesnoth and I stumbled upon the newest version of the Quenoth Elves in Wesnoth 1.13.13. Sadly, the new units lack descriptions so I thought I could finally be useful to the project (since I can't code, I want to help in a different way). My idea is to create new and better d...