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by UndeadRussian
May 22nd, 2012, 1:37 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Desormer[fan-fic]
Replies: 24
Views: 2975

Re: Desormer[fan-fic]

Okay i have Chapters 1-5 all grammer checked and ready to go ill post them tonight!
by UndeadRussian
May 21st, 2012, 5:23 pm
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Wesnoth: Roll to dodge rpg!
Replies: 22
Views: 10503

Re: Wesnoth: Roll to dodge rpg!

okay
by UndeadRussian
May 18th, 2012, 5:06 pm
Forum: Strategies & Tips
Topic: The most overused and the most underused faction
Replies: 38
Views: 9784

Re: The most overused and the most underused faction

I don't see a lot of people playing Drakes, alest not on purpose. Most common i see being played are Rebels and Loyalists.
by UndeadRussian
May 18th, 2012, 2:08 am
Forum: Forum Games
Topic: Wesnoth: Roll to dodge rpg!
Replies: 22
Views: 10503

Re: Wesnoth: Roll to dodge rpg!

I will rest in the infirmary till sunset, i will then escape, without a fight out with, and head to the nearest cemetery. all today i recite spells of both fighting and necromancy.(sorry if thats to long)
by UndeadRussian
May 17th, 2012, 2:03 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Desormer[fan-fic]
Replies: 24
Views: 2975

Re: Desormer[fan-fic]

okay thank you, I should have a friend coming over today to help me with grammer, etc. I have already writen chapters 3 and 4 but ill wait to post them till the grammer is checked.
by UndeadRussian
May 17th, 2012, 2:30 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Desormer[fan-fic]
Replies: 24
Views: 2975

Re: Desormer[fan-fic]

Okay for anyone that is actually reading here is chapters 1 & 2 (revised). Tell me what u think. Prologue, Death....... What is death? Is it simply an extension of life? Is it the end of life? Or is it the beginning of a new life? These are questions every necromancer in history has asked. A questio...
by UndeadRussian
May 16th, 2012, 10:52 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Desormer[fan-fic]
Replies: 24
Views: 2975

Re: Desormer[fan-fic]

Other i understand, Thank you for the realism, i will how ever always write even if it doesn't make me money, ill do it for a hobby.Ohh and other i will say u have been the only one so far that has really given me any critique our help, thank you.
by UndeadRussian
May 16th, 2012, 7:02 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: The Southern Chains [Fan-fic]
Replies: 51
Views: 12527

Re: The Southern Chains [Fan-fic]

Okay good Hey just wondering your fan fic can inspired me to write my own, could u read it and give me some advice?
by UndeadRussian
May 16th, 2012, 5:30 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Desormer[fan-fic]
Replies: 24
Views: 2975

Re: Desormer[fan-fic]

I might get them posted in the next hour, if ideas keep pumping out of my head like this. i am only 15 but i plan to be a writer when i get older.
by UndeadRussian
May 16th, 2012, 4:56 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Desormer[fan-fic]
Replies: 24
Views: 2975

Re: Desormer[fan-fic]

Okay iam rewriting chapter one and writing chapter 2. I plan to post them both tomorrow.
by UndeadRussian
May 16th, 2012, 4:41 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Desormer[fan-fic]
Replies: 24
Views: 2975

Re: Desormer[fan-fic]

Thank u all for the feed back. Russian is my first langue and polish is my second.I plan to rewrite the whole thing and develop the story a little better, and yes english is very hard to learn but i am learning fast. i have a friend who is going to edit and correct my work after iam done with it so ...
by UndeadRussian
May 16th, 2012, 4:07 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Desormer[fan-fic]
Replies: 24
Views: 2975

Re: Desormer[fan-fic]

I am sorry, English is my 3rd langue.I will try to write more proper and not hurry my replies our messages. Thank you for the critique
by UndeadRussian
May 16th, 2012, 3:40 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Desormer[fan-fic]
Replies: 24
Views: 2975

Re: Desormer[fan-fic]

Thank u iam rewriting as we speak i do want to lengthen the story more. So do you think i should critique our should i move on to something else?
by UndeadRussian
May 16th, 2012, 3:08 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Desormer[fan-fic]
Replies: 24
Views: 2975

Re: Desormer[fan-fic]

well like i said this is only a draft. Ill change the name of the city and no english isn't my first, sorry about the text speak and the grammatical errors but do u have anything good to say about it? our should i just kinda give up now.
by UndeadRussian
May 16th, 2012, 2:43 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Desormer[fan-fic]
Replies: 24
Views: 2975

Desormer[fan-fic]

Tell me what u think give me some critique lol this is only like the first half of the first chapter i just want to know if anybody would even be interested lol......so here it is lol. Prologue, Death....... What is death? Is it simply an extension of life? Is it the end of life? Or is it the beginn...