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by Newell
April 13th, 2009, 9:21 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Changing the -
Replies: 9
Views: 2236

Re: Changing the -

Somebody concerned about dashes! I think I'm in love.
by Newell
April 13th, 2009, 7:08 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Grammar Check: The War of Terrador
Replies: 3
Views: 1576

Re: Grammar Check: The War of Terrador

WOW. Thank you SO much. This grammar and input on the story is excellent! Thanks! I will gladly add anything you check and modify (within reason, of course) Thanks for investing your time in this! Happy to help. Here 's scenario 5. 6 is here . Also 7 is here . Oh, and what does Matthew N1 mean? It ...
by Newell
April 12th, 2009, 11:09 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Grammar Check: The War of Terrador
Replies: 3
Views: 1576

Re: Grammar Check: The War of Terrador

Hi Dragon, Here's my input on your first scenario. I will continue editing unless you say otherwise. EDIT: One more thing on that first scenario: in the 'die' event, get rid of "Captain!" before "Noooo!" because it made me think the captain had died. Also perhaps change Ryter's name to "Captain Ryte...
by Newell
April 10th, 2009, 11:55 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Proposed additions to Manual
Replies: 22
Views: 4126

Re: Proposed additions to Manual

Suggestion for Section 1.3.5: Your army consists of units that you have recruited or recalled. Each unit is identified by its race, level and class (it is a good strategy to have an army containing units of a variety of classes). More details on race, level and class are available in the in-game hel...
by Newell
April 9th, 2009, 4:14 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Introductions
Replies: 28
Views: 4563

Re: Introductions

Well hey there. Creative writing is more my domain but clear and concise prose is easily handled. I'm a grammar Nazi and can handle proof reading, so I'll happily polish up or improve anything put in front of me. I'm decent at mimicking others' style of writing; my own style, however, is very much i...
by Newell
April 9th, 2009, 4:03 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Tasks for writers
Replies: 14
Views: 6764

Re: Tasks for writers

Q: How does one make improvements to the Game Manual?