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by Newell
April 13th, 2009, 9:21 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Changing the -
Replies: 9
Views: 3184

Re: Changing the -

Somebody concerned about dashes! I think I'm in love.
by Newell
April 13th, 2009, 7:08 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Grammar Check: The War of Terrador
Replies: 3
Views: 2012

Re: Grammar Check: The War of Terrador

WOW. Thank you SO much. This grammar and input on the story is excellent! Thanks! I will gladly add anything you check and modify (within reason, of course) Thanks for investing your time in this! Happy to help. Here 's scenario 5. 6 is here . Also 7 is here . Oh, and what does Matthew N1 mean? It ...
by Newell
April 12th, 2009, 11:09 pm
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Grammar Check: The War of Terrador
Replies: 3
Views: 2012

Re: Grammar Check: The War of Terrador

Hi Dragon, Here's my input on your first scenario. I will continue editing unless you say otherwise. EDIT: One more thing on that first scenario: in the 'die' event, get rid of "Captain!" before "Noooo!" because it made me think the captain had died. Also perhaps change Ryter's n...
by Newell
April 10th, 2009, 11:55 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Proposed additions to Manual
Replies: 22
Views: 5814

Re: Proposed additions to Manual

Suggestion for Section 1.3.5: Your army consists of units that you have recruited or recalled. Each unit is identified by its race, level and class (it is a good strategy to have an army containing units of a variety of classes). More details on race, level and class are available in the in-game hel...
by Newell
April 9th, 2009, 4:14 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Introductions
Replies: 28
Views: 6202

Re: Introductions

Well hey there. Creative writing is more my domain but clear and concise prose is easily handled. I'm a grammar Nazi and can handle proof reading, so I'll happily polish up or improve anything put in front of me. I'm decent at mimicking others' style of writing; my own style, however, is very much i...
by Newell
April 9th, 2009, 4:03 am
Forum: Writers’ Forum
Topic: Tasks for writers
Replies: 14
Views: 7742

Re: Tasks for writers

Q: How does one make improvements to the Game Manual?